[✗] [Pending] Application :D

[Fariyan 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Fariyan

How old are you?:14

What timezone are you in?:BRT UTC-3

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes,I am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes, I have and I have agreed

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule that is that you must have a skin that relates to your roleplay character  I agree 100% with this because I spent 3 hours looking for a skin before I read this rule, so i knew it already, If I am an elf and I look like i am a human it just doesn't make sense

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Nope I agree 100% with all the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it on google when i was searching for role play servers (excuse me I am not good with fonts sorry!)

Link(s) to past White list Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be white-listed without logging in at least once):Yes i have.

Definitions :

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing means to leave your personality and act like an imaginary character you're assigned to or you create.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming means to use information that your character you created for your role playing doesn't know about.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Power-emoting means to do something your character cant do. Power emoting is also another form of meta gaming.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Faryanus Elvus

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male.

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 102

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Before the Battle of Leyulin a High elf called Jordan Hammock and a Wood Elf called Leahy Elvus fell in love, they usually met on underground caves and tried to hide from the other elves because they were scared that other elves wouldn't allow high elves and wood elves to be together... When the Battle of Leyulin began Leahy and Jordan had a baby boy named Faryanus,he was a wood elf but kind of looked like half high elf.His mother and father perished while trying to protect their child.Gold was poured in their eyes,they were whipped with tree branches,they were punished.During the war Faryanus was rescued by a Wood elf called Samira, she loved Faryanus more than her mother, she taught him to fight and he became a great fighter.They retreated across Fiandria to their new wood elf city Cerulin and stayed there until peace was eventually made with the "Treaty of Fiandria" .When Faryanus was playing with his woodland friends,a dark elf attacked Samira, Faryanus tried to protect her, but he failed, he had been roaming the woods since then and it had been 50 years without any social interaction and finally he found a civilization of wood elves. he was alone, he wanted someone to love and marry and have kids, but he never thought someone would love him, he thought he was ugly but in reality, he was more handsome than any other elf that existed.But when her "step mother/foster mother" got attacked he lost his every memory he had, including the memory of the world he lives in. He saw his ears and then clipped them, he threw away his ears in the water and blood started flowing.He did not want to look like an elf but people recognized him but he didn't.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Flirty, likes to eat Fruits. Dislikes high elves.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)He wants true love and he wants to have kids.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Fighting and eating food.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)woodcutting.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Looks very handsome, has black hair,and is 6,4 feet tall does not have long ears like regular elves because hes a child of an High elf and a Wood elf

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide sorry i could not find anything in the skin archive that relates to my made character :(

 

Edited August 20, 2016 by Fariyan
The staff member told me to Thats why

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

Your application is really very good but there are a few things you need to change

 

-Your power-gaming definition is not quite correct.  Feel free to check our wiki for help!

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

-Your biography is really quite good, but try to include some more lore.  Also, if your character is a full elf there would be no way for its ears to be smaller than normal unless he clipped them.  If that is the way you would like to take it make sure to include it in your biography.

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

 

-Your personality traits need some working on, hunting and roaming the woods are not exactly personality traits.  Try instead something like, loner or moody.

 

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes.  If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to message me here on the forums!  I am always happy to help!

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

Unfortunately you did not make all of the necessary changes.

 

-You never changed your power-gaming definition.  Again, please feel free to look over our wiki for any help you may need.

 

-You failed to change the part about your ears.  Your character could not have shorter ears than most elves because he is a full elf, even if he is half High elf and half wood elf.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.  If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to message me here on the forums!  I am always happy to help!

 

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.