[✗] [Pending]Application for LOTC

[Azyriah 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ThatHolyAssbutt

 

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?: Central

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No metagaming

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for RP servers and I came across this

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/forum/28-whitelist-applications/

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the art of playing a character other than yourself

 

What is metagaming?: Using information that your character doesn’t know

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Doing something your character is physically unable to do

 

 

 

Character’s name: Azyriah

 

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 19

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.):

Azyriah was born in Laureh’lin in 1528 during the Treaty signing. Traveling for her uncle, she has seen many things, from Anthos to Salvus, all the way to Al-Wakrah. Being a history buff, Azyriah has always enjoyed the Grand Harvest and the assassination of King Skippy Irongut. At the age of ten, she was out playing with Lur wolves when she was taken by an unknown orc and held hostage for months. She escaped to find her uncle assassinated, and has since taken a darker path. She’s learned to not grow attached to anyone, since they’ll end up dead or worse sooner than later.

 

 

 

Now, Azzy can be found climbing the trees or practicing her shooting. She’s grown to be a bit nicer – emphasis on a bit – towards people, and is known for seducing local male elves.

 

Personality Traits: Rude is one word to describe Azyriah. Her boyish attitude has gotten her many distasteful glances from townsfolk, and her snappy remarks have given her some verbal lashings from her uncle. She’s never gotten close with anyone or anything, and likes to be by herself most of the time. She is very adventurous when it comes to exploring new territory, and likes to loves to read books. She’s  known to be somewhat of an introvert.

 

Ambitions: Azzy aspires to be the best markswoman in Laureh’lin.

Strengths/Talents: Archery, swimming, shooting from long distances, jumping, running.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Azyriah has grown a fear of being captured. Ever since she was kidnapped, she’s been worried sick about her safety. Not to mention she needs to work on being nice to people . . .

 

Appearance: Being only 19, Azzy looks surprisingly older. Her dark red hair reaches down to the middle of her back, with special piercings in her pointed ears. Long, dark tattoos spiral down her shoulders underneath her green and brown clothes. She always wears gloves for her bow, and sometimes uses them when brawling.

 

Skin:  http://i67.tinypic.com/54tx5u.png

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Pending...

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions, mayhaps use an example?

 

-Anthos was an entirely separate continent that was destroyed over 100 years ago in-character, likewise, it was a continent, not a city/country. 

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-Having one's guardians killed by orcs randomly is unfathomably cliche and overused. If you wish to have your character;s guardian die needlessly, please have a better reason for such.

 

-You have 24 hours to make the needed changes. Failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

Denied.

 

-You may re-apply in 12 hours from this denial message.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.