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[sugarman12 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:sugarman12        
How old are you?:12
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Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?:roleplaying is when you play as a character other than yourself in a "make-believe" game or in a video game.
What is metagaming?: Using knowledge that the player knows, but his character doesn't know. 
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Trying to do an action that leaves the other player no time to react Eg.: "Andren kicks Inra of a cliff to her doom".
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Andren (or "Aner" for short)
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: Orc Goblin
Character’s age: 90

Biography: 

Andren was born in the islands of Vailor, in the year 1457.

Before the descendant races arrived. He had witnessed all the things that happened to Vailor, but didn't take part in them, but the thing he remembered the most is that when Kal'Ash was attacked by unknown things.
Andren was adopted by a family of Uruk Orcs, living in the realm of Athera. and he doesn't really know who his real family is.
Most of his life, Andren felt left-out, lonely, and sometimes sad.
His family gave him food and water, but they didn't give him the feeling that he was part of the family.
After 70 years, he got sick of his family, and ran away, hidden in the realm of Anthos.
After 2 years, his family saw him and brought him back to their house, now jailed in the basement.
Andren did not see the light of day for 18 years, and only ate one bowl of potato soup every week. The light in the basement was very dim, only lit by several candels.
This whole event changed Andren, as he didn't speak to any living creature so long.
Andren gave an idea a lot of thought: Running away. He carefully crafted with his superior intellect, a machine that will blow up the basement, and then create a smoke screen, so he could run away.

After the plan worked, he ran away from his adopting family, and his family feared him because of what he can do.
But because he didn't see sunlight for so much time, his eyesight was hurt, and he can't see very well.
Andren continued to live in the realm of Athera, now taking on missions as a mercenary, and sometimes fighting in Orcish wars.
Andren is well known in the Goblin community, as a bright tinkerer.

Personality Traits: Andren thinks that other orc types are stupid, but he does not tell them, in fear of being killed.
Andren does his job as he is told, only if he gets a reward.
If people wont give Andren a reward, he will be very short tempered.

Ambitions: To find my real family.
To be the world's best tinkerer.
To be feared by everyone.

To travel to the uzg.
 
Strengths/Talents: Tactician: I understand complex plans and strategies.
Leader: I am very good at leading the group according to my plan, and using my technology and the other orc's brute force.
Smart: I know how to build complex machines.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: 
I have a fear of being trapped again.
I am easily distracted by things.
If I don't hear music for a long time, I will become deppresed and sad.
My eyesight isn't very good.

Appearance: I am 5.6 feet, I have no hair, my eyes are yellow, my skin is yellowish green, i have some armor on me, and my pants and gloves are light brown, I have a small scar on my back.

Skin:  https://postimg.org/image/8sbkzxfp1/ 

[tilly 5115]

• You might want to take a look at your definition of powergaming - feel free to look it up, but remember to put it into your own words!
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the dukes war in Vailor!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• Make sure that your character's biography takes place in the correct map (which is most likely Vailor, considering the age).

You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need to make a second post! Just edit it! Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

Denied.

 

The necessary changes weren't made within the allotted time. 

 

Please check this thread so that, when you apply next, you get the right info in your bio.

 

You may reapply in 12 hours. If you need any help, I'm here for you.

 

Good luck.

[tilly 5115]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.