[✗] 396Vette's Application

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What’s your Minecraft account name?:396Vette

How old are you?:12

What timezone are you in?:Central

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The rule i agree with the most would be that harassment is not tolerated.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I really like roleplay so i looked up roleplay servers and LOTC was pretty popular so i looked into it.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):I don't have any links

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes times

 

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplay is acting as a character and potraying someone your not. Roleplay is about what TO say as in keeping speech during the roleplay itself.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is all about strategy,method,and action used in roleplay or a game that goes passed limits and the external factors to affect the game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Power-gaming is a style of interacting.Games it interacts with are particularly video games, boardgames,and roleplaying games.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Beatrice

Character’s sex: (male or female?)female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)Beatrice was born in Oren 1517. Beatrice and her mother were very close, her father on the other hand would treat them poorly. Beatrice's mother gave Beatrice a bag of food,water,clothing,a bow,some arrows, and handed her a cloak.She told Beatrice to run away from her home and find a new one. Her mother over heard her husband talking to the neighbors about Beatrice and the neighbors son getting married to eachother. Beatrice was only 14. Beatrice has been away from her home for 5 years now. She has traveled to many nations (Aegis,Solace,Salvus,Konigsberg,ect.). Beatrice has learned to become very good at combat,farming,and cooking. Beatrice has experienced many wars and falls of many great nations. When she heard that Orenian had fallen in 1538 she was so sad she decided to go back and see what was left and to find out where her mother was.To this day along with her missions she is still trying to find her mother.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Beatrice is strong,smart,and she likes to practice with small swords instead of large ones.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)Beatrice is working hard every day so she can become a King's Guard

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)Beatrice is very skilled with her bow,knives,and small swords.She is also very skilled at cooking and farming.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Beatrice needs to work on her navigation skill she is not good at navigating nations and empires so most of the time she has a map or asks for directions from fellow travelers.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Beatrice has light pale skin,she has blonde hair,blue-gray eyes,and Beatrice is 5 foot 2 inches.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/princess-7960997.png.)

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography is a part where applicants get a chance to introduce the backstory of their characters to the server. The Application Team expects applicants to write two, lengthy paragraphs, clearly stating how their character found themselves arriving at the islands of Axios. Your biography is short and vague. What happened to your character in the past? What events changed them? How did they react to certain things?;
• Your character's strengths and weaknesses aren't balanced. They are strong, clever, good with swords, good with bows et cetera, but their only weakness is that they need a map when traveling. Please balance this out;
• Strong isn't a personality trait, neither is clever. Personality traits are how your character behaves. Are they short-tempered? Perhaps they are greedy?;
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;
• Your definition of metagaming and powergaming are incorrect. You may use the thread below to gain more information about them. However, please do NOT copy and paste them onto your application, as the AT would love to hear them from your own words.

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.