[✗] Broken_Atlas Application

[Broken_Atlas 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Broken_Atlas

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?: Mountain Time

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Indeed

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no meme, no harassment, and the others that are simile to those.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I'm a little confused on how the communication is made, like the commands I'm supposed to use.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for a RP server, then I found this one.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I have

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you play as a character that is not you. You act as if it were you though.

What is metagaming?: Knowing knowledge that you RP character might not know of, and using it to your advantage.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: When you do an action, without giving the other person a chance to defend themselves.

 

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: Atlas

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 21

Biography: Atlas was born during the winter in the north, and that's all he knows of his family. He was given away upon birth to a family, which he cannot remember much of either. For he left that family when he was 10. Ever sense he left that family, he has always stayed where it was snowing, he loves the snow. Where he used to live, he was the go to man if help was ever needed. He could help clean, cook, carry, or even kill. Anything that would earn him coin. Up north they dubbed him, The Winters Solstice, because when the people heard that he was going out killing, it felt like their longest night. One day, when he was merely 17, an old lady offered him a job that he couldn't resist. She told him to help her guard her wears until she reached the south. Atlas did not like the idea of leaving the snow, but her offer was to good to turn down. Reluctantly, he agreed. It was a long and extreme journey to the south, but he finally made it. When he approached the old lady asking for his money, she only replied with a stick in his face, a blast of light, then his memory whipped. Ever sense then, he doesn't remember who he is, or why he always shakes in the heat (it's because he is in his prime when in the snow. Just clearing that up). From that point on, he traveled the south in search for who he was. But doing so lead him to witness wars. From witnessing those wars, he strives to stay out of conflict as much as possible, and to help out whoever he can.

Personality Traits: He always shivers in the heat. He loves the snow and hates the heat. He's not good with people. Doesn't want to join conflict. Calm.

Ambitions: At this point, all Atlas wants is to help people.

Strengths/Talents: Sneaking, Has great eyesight, is extremely good in the snow.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is bad with people, and he's not as tough as everyone else. Also he can't cook.

Appearance: He wears a hood, as if it were made for the snow, and he has pure white eyes.

[Proddy 2415]

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

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• Your definitions for roleplaying, power-gaming and meta-gaming are very brief and vague - please expand on the three of them. Perhaps even give an example of a scenario where meta-gaming and power-gaming would be in-action? You may refer to the three links below to help you make these corrections, but please remember to not copy-and-paste the definitions from over there to here, but rather put them into your own words.

Roleplaying Definition

 

Metagaming Definition

 

Powergaming Definition

• Your biography must contain at least three pieces of lore that are relevant to the history of your character's race or to Lord of the Craft 's world and setting as whole - to give you some ideas, this can be anything from city/town names to notable wars/events that would have happened in your characters lifetime (the mass exodus from Vailor to Axios, for example). You should consult and study the LoTC Wiki to help you with this - I think that you'll find the Humans section of the wiki to be especially useful and relevant to you!
• Being 'good in the snow' isn't really much of a strength - please consider something else and include that into the Strengths section instead - be creative with it, but please remember to be realistic! Your character likely wouldn't be able to fight of five men with one hand tied behind his back, nor would he be the greatest swordsman or acrobat in the world.
• Where you state that your character 'cannot cook' in the Weaknesses section of the application, it contradicts an earlier statement in your biography that your character was hired to cook for people at certain points - why would people hire your character if he's awful at what he's been hired for? Please rectify this.
• As a Human, your character cannot possibly have white-eyes - unless he's blind, it goes against the lore! Consider natural human eye colours that you see in everyday life and perhaps use one of them, or you can alternatively refer to and study the section on the LoTC wiki regarding Humans that I linked earlier on. (As a side note - if you struggle to edit the eye-colour on your skin, please do message me about it and send the skin my way! I can get this done for you in a matter of seconds.)

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You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial. If you have any questions regarding your denial or the next steps you should take, then please don't hesitate to PM me over these forums.

[Proddy 2415]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.