[✗] Walter The Farmer

[SikMcNasty 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:SikMcNasty

How old are you?:15

What timezone are you in?:EST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yeah

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yeah

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:There are no GM refunds on lost items. If you die anywhere in the map, you will not have items respawned. /bread is a helpful command to help you get back on your feet, though!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:My Friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):no

What is roleplaying?:is the act of playing a role

What is metagaming?:using knowledge that you know but your character doesn't

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:forcing actions against another player

Character’s name:Walter Frankfert

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age: 25

Biography: There once was a woman and a man who lived on a farm there names were Marideth Frankfert and Ezikel Frankfert they are of the culture group called Highlanders. They fell in love and had a child of the name Walter Frankfert he was born in the barn next to the wheat field. The first word Walter ever said was wheat and that when Ezikel knew he had a real farmer on his hands. As he grew up he was a part of defending of wolves and such from getting to the livestock and crops. He was also a part of many hunting expeditions with his father where they hunted deer and rabbits.

 

As Walter grew older so did his parents when walter was 18 his father got really sick and died. His final words were to his son which were “keep the family name alive, Walter” Ezikel died at the age of 138. Walter knew right then and there that he was gonna do his darndest to keep the farm going. Seven years later his mother then past at the age of 150 Walter blames this on the curse that was set by Iblees. Now Walter finds himself alone for the first time in his whole life.  

Ambitions: a good farmer

Strengths/Talents: Farming and Fishing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Selling and Reading

Appearance: 6ft, Black hair, no scars

[Proddy 2415]

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

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• Just copy-and-pasting word-for-word the 'no GM refunds' rule into the 'What rule you agree with the most' section doesn't really tell me that you've read and understood the server rules entirely - you should specify your favourite rule and then briefly explain why you like the sound of that rule.
• Your definitions for roleplaying, power-gaming and meta-gaming are very brief and vague - please expand on the three of them. Perhaps even give an example of a scenario where meta-gaming and power-gaming would be in-action? You may refer to the three links below to help you make these corrections, but please remember to not copy-and-paste the definitions from over there to here, but rather put them into your own words.

Roleplaying Definition

Metagaming Definition

Powergaming Definition

 

• Your biography must contain at least three pieces of lore that are relevant to the history of your character's race or to Lord of the Craft 's world and setting as whole - to give you some ideas, this can be anything from city/town names to notable wars/events that would have happened in your characters lifetime (the mass exodus from Vailor to Axios, for example). You should consult and study the LoTC Wiki to help you with this - I think that you'll find the Humans section of the wiki to be especially useful and relevant to you!
• Your characters parents dying past the age of 100 is very, very unlikely to happen - most humans lifespans come to a close during the ages 70-80, in actuality, and even then if your character is only 25 years old then their parents would have gave birth to them when they were older than 45, which is impossible since most women become infertile after that age. From both a realistic and a lore point of view, the parents being that old doesn't really make sense, and I would like for you to rectify it.
• Only putting 'a good farmer' for the 'Ambitions' section doesn't actually tell us a whole lot about what your character wishes to achieve in the future - does he want to become a better farmer than he already is? Become known as the greatest farmer in the lands? Make him and his family well known for being great farmers? You should expand upon this and maybe even add an additional ambition, in order to give your character more substance and flesh them out.

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You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial. If you have any questions regarding your denial or the next steps you should take, then please don't hesitate to PM me over these forums.

[Proddy 2415]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.