[✗] Application

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What’s your Minecraft account name?: kelsieminecraft

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: GMT

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Derogatory remarks towards those on Lord of the Craft mediums of communication

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Searched Minecraft servers

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a character or role.

What is metagaming?: acting/talking out of character

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Doing things you would not usually be able to do. It often happens without a characters consent meaning they are overpowered and unable to respond to the actions forced upon them.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Sienna Gold

Character’s sex: (male or female?): Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Heartlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 2o

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

My character comes from Felsen, in The Holy Orenian Empire. I have travelled to many lands such as, Krinfird, Lorraine, Savoy and Istria before settling in Felsen where I was originally born. I was born in 1527 during the time where Aeroch Nor was vassalized.

I travelled to Felsen as they stick to my religion which was important during my up-bringing. My religion is Church of the Cannon. I speak common which suits where I am living as they mainly speak common there.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): I like to be around people who help a lot and like to get involved to keep peace. I dislike how people try to ruin the peace of that land by causing unnecessary chaos.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): I want to help others, and maybe be a lord of a village one day.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): I am a quick learner which is a good thing to have a strength in.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) I need to work on my confidence and look deeper into how the minecraft world works.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My character has brown hair, green eyes, I am a average minecraft height, i wear a flower head band, with summer looking clothes.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Personality traits is a part where the applicant states how their character behaves. Yours only contains his likes Is your character greedy? Perhaps short-tempered? Please explain in-depth;
• The pieces of lore you've put in your biography has no context. They look as if they were included for the sake of having lore. Please include context of your lore references. Lore can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;
• Your application only contains one strength and one weakness. Please include three of each;
• The strengths and weaknesses part of your application is for your character's strengths and weaknesses, and not you yourself. "Needing to learn how to look deep into the minecraft world" would not be an appropriate weaknesses for your character;
• I would like to remind you that the roleplaying on the server is done in third person form, and not first person. So instead of "I look at the man." It would be appropriate to use "[Insert character name here] looks at the man.". Please fix your content accordingly;
• Your character's skin has ripped jeans, boots and a modern looking top. The Lord of the Craft is a premium medieval themed roleplaying server. Please choose a skin accordingly;
• Females can't be lords, they can be "ladies";
• Your definitions for metagaming is incorrect. You may learn more about the definitions from the link below. However, DO NOT copy and paste the definitions as the Application Team would love to hear them from your own words. 

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.