[✗] character application

[leondre 0]

hello, i'd like to re apply my character :)

 

minecraft account name: DamonIsBelieber

age: 14

timzone: CEST

i'm aware the server is PG-13

i read and agreed the rules

i agree the most with not abusing of glitches

all the rules make sense :D

i was searching on google for a roleplay server until i found this one

past whitelist application can be found: 

 

i have logged in the server a few days ago

what is roleplaying? roleplaying is pretending to be another character

what is metagaming? it is using information outside the life of the character you roleplay as to use them as guideance, and it's punishable

what is powergaming? it is making your character overpowered, by example saying he or she is immortal etc

ok, so now my character:

character name: Gathrodir

character is male

characters race: High elves

characters age: 21

Biography: He comes from  the kingdom of urguan, he traveled to  the north, the wilds, and the cloudlands. He likes to help other characters, it doesn't matter what race they are, he will always help when he can.

Personality traits: he has the squirk that he can't go to sleep unless he sleeps outside, in a forest. He always prays before he eats, he likes kind and nice poeple, he also likes to fight when there is war, he dislikes mean poeple who make fun of others

ambitions: He wants to become the best archer

talent: he's really good at arching

weakness: He really cant fight with a sword

appearance: He is 6.20 feet tall, he has long blonde hair and a big scar on his arm

skin: i tried to upload a screenshot, but it took too much size it said, i'm very sorry

 

[Argontum 153]

[Argontum 153]

Greetings applicant;

Your application has been denied, but do not fret! This does not mean the end. The reason for this denial would be the inability of your application to meet up to our standards. If you follow and complete the changes I lay out for you, your next application might get accepted!

 

• Your application isn’t even formatted properly. Please use the correct format when applying as otherwise you won’t be accepted. Here’s a link to the format.

 

 

• Your biography is a part where applicants get a chance to introduce the backstory of their characters to the server. The Application Team expects applicants to write two, lengthy paragraphs, clearly stating how their character found themselves arriving at the islands of Axios. Your biography is short and vague. What happened to your character in the past? What events changed them? How did they react to certain things?;
• Personality traits is a part where the applicant states how their character behaves. Yours only contains his likes and dislikes. Is your character greedy? Perhaps short-tempered? Please explain in-depth;

• Your biography doesn't contain any lore from the Lord of the Craft. Please include at least 3 pieces of lore from it. Lore can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;

• Your definitions for metagaming is vague, and the powergaming one is incorrect. You may learn more about the definitions from the link below. However, DO NOT copy and paste the definitions as the Application Team would love to hear them from your own words.

 

 

• Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

If you’re having trouble try this short guide:

Go to: http://minecraft.novaskin.me/#

On the far left of the screen there's a button that says 'Open' Click that and select your characters skin.

Once you've successfully opened your characters skin on the top bar there should be a similar green button that says 'Photo'

Hit photo and it should show you a 3D model of your skin. Once it's come up and you're happy save the image of the skin to your computer.

Next, go to; http://imgur.com/ trusted image sharing site.

On the top hit the 'Upload Images', then hit browse computer and select the 3D model of your skin that you saved.

Once you've successfully loaded the image, hit 'Start Upload' and after a bit it should send you to a page with that image.

Simple copy the URL link and put it on the application.

 

 

                   You may re-apply in 24 hours from the point of this denial.

Do not hesitate to contact me if you need help or have any questions.

 

[Argontum 153]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.