[✗] [Pending] whitelist application

[MadMustaches 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: MadMustache

How old are you?: 13

What timezone are you in?: EST

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No racist or abusive material may be posted at any time, regardless of who it’s aimed at. We’re all here to have fun, and attacking people isn’t alright

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I got bored so me and my sister looked up good roleplaying servers and Lord Of The Craft came up.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): none

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a made up character or person

What is metagaming?: a strategy used in game and transcends a prescribed ruleset.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Thea

Character’s sex: (male or female?) female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) high elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Unlike most High Elves, I was born in an unknown location in 1558. My earliest memory was three blurred faces having a conversation about who I assume was me. "How is she a High Elf? Both of us are Dark Elves," a woman scoffed. "She's a freak of nature. Only that can explain it," one said. "Take her to the High Elves," a man's voice demanded. I felt a sharp pain in my arm and my vision went blurry and I assume I fainted.

     I woke up in a home. A nice one, may I add. Two High Elves, one male and the other female, stood in front of the crib I lay in holding hands. "She's going to grow up to be beautiful," the woman said. "I'm glad she's awake," the male sighed.

     I learned that my adoptive father couldn't hear and so I learned to speak sign language and became very fluent. My mother taught me to use a bow and arrow and so if I was told to play with the children nearby, I would practice archery instead. My family had flaws but we were happy anyway.

     8 years later, the family I grew up with disappeared and I was left to fend for myself. To this day I do not know where they went, but I'm sure, being the happy Elves they were, they are happy. Anyway, being a 8-year-old left on my own, I went into something of a depression. I ran away from Lin'sulan at age 13. I found a small village outside of Lin'sulan. I don't remember it that well but I do somewhat remember a farfolk helping me back to Lin'sulan.

     Now I'm 19 years old. I'm growing tired of this boring life I have. I always knew leaving Lin'sulan would grant me adventure...

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Thea, not knowing the difference between bad and good, often times seems clueless. she prefers long distance attacks opposed to melee. She is fluent in sign language.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Enchanter because she knows that there are hurtful people in the world and she must protect those she can by enchanting weapons for them.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)  Archery.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Melee fighting/fist fighting

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 5 feet 6 inches tall. golden hair. green eyes. no scars.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You do not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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Please elaborate on the following things:

-your favorite rule

-how you found out about the server

-why Thea was called a "freak of nature"

-Thea's ambitions

-How Thea became fluent in sign language

-How Thea became a talented archer at the age of 17 which would be considered very young for an elf

Also your metagaming definition is incorrect and needs to be corrected.

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If you have any questions please message me.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

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Denied for:

-PLAGIARIZING YOUR METAGAMING DEFINITION

 

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt1

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.