[✗] Application

[Mencey88 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:_Danny_1212

How old are you?:11

What timezone are you in?:Eastern.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Your skin must be an RP-friendly representation of your character Because people will use in-appropriate skins or offensive skins.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for a Roleplay server one day and I came across Lord of the craft on YouTube.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes.

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is Playing a character that has some similarities to you.

What is metagaming?:Meta gaming is using other information for your Roleplay

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming is where you do some thing that you would do to make some one laugh or to do some thing that would be un-realsitic in that Roleplay

 

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Jespin lapan

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male.

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)cavern dwarf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)58

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in?

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Jespin Lapan was born in a cave with his 3 siblings  in 1536 because his mother was banished from the clan so was his father his mother had died by the time he was 12 his mother was looking for some one to take care of I'm and his siblings so she went to a human village and he never saw his mother again. when he was 15 he got his very own sword to train with because he started learning how to hunt. But one day he ventured out with his 3 siblings and they got lost. They Found a place to sleep and in the morning he went to hunt for breakfast so he kissed his brother and 2 sisters on the fore head by the time he got back his siblings were no where to be seen all there was, was his brothers backpack. He ventured out and on the way he trained to fight because he does not know what took them. When he was walking one day he heard some one screaming so he hid and he saw a girl being dragged by orc's he went to go save the girl and the girl got away but Jespin was stabbed and thrown in the river by the orcs and declared revenge on the orcs but he was worried more about his siblings.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)He wishes to be a good hunter as his father was.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)Engineering and being brave.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Socializing and manners

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)2 scars,4 ft 2 inches, Brown hair short, small head, big hand's, big arms big legs, Medium sized beard.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your roleplaying definition is incorrect.

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming definition, as it is too brief for one to exactly understand what you're talking about.

 

-You likewise need to expand upon your power-gaming definition.

 

-You need to add server lore to your character's biography, such as where in what realm he was born, and any important events that transpired near him.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and hard to understand. People dont hunt animals with swords, and there're large gaps in your character's biography that leave way more questions about your character's life than answers.

 

-You make no mention of your character doing anything remotely with any for of engineeering, yet lsit such as one of his skills.

 

-Being randomly attacked by a random orc for no reason, and vowing revenge is extremely cliche, and overused. 

 

-You need to balance your character's skills and weaknesses.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.