[✗] _Hxper's Application

[_Hxper 0]

OOC

What’s your Minecraft account name?: _Hxper

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: Central Time Zone

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: No ( they are labeled outdated at the time of this application)

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I will read them when they are updated

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): ^^^

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for roleplay servers and stumbled upon this.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

 

IG Character

 

 

Character’s name: Max

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 26

Biography : Max was born in around the forest next to Cloud Temple around 1527. He stayed in the woods avoiding human contact until he was about 10 years old. Max moved to the capital city or the Oren Empire, Felsen, when he turn 12. Max did nothing for 10 years in Felsen, blending in with the crowd was what he was best at. At the age of 23, Max moved to Hallowvale once he found that the Oren Empire took it. In Hallowvale, Max was taught how to fight by a retired blacksmith. Now Max is 26 and is gone out to search a mage who will teach Max magic...

Personality Traits: Max is can be rude and usually keeps to himself. Max loves animals but hates having to clean, or take care of himself.

Ambitions: Max wants to someday become a powerful mage tucked away in a forest.

Strengths/Talents: Fighting, yelling at things, conversing.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He wants to learn magic, he has trouble focusing.

Appearance: Max looks like an average 26 year old male, he works out so he doesn't look obese, but he is Arnold S. either. Max has short black hair and he is usually wearing travel gear

Skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/assassin-2926419/ (link to skin because screenshot wouldn't upload p.s im not an assassin the skin is just called that)

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[Argontum 153]

Greetings applicant;

Your application has been denied, but do not fret! This does not mean the end. The reason for this denial would be the inability of your application to meet up to our standards. If you follow and complete the changes I lay out for you, your next application might get accepted!

•  Some parts of your application is missing. Please write everything that is included in the whitelist application format, which can be found here;

 

 

 

• Please read all the rules, even if they are outdated, and I'm not even sure they're even outdated. This will be required for you in order to get accepted. 
• Please expand your character's biography by just one more paragraph, that way we can know your character a bit more and the reason behind all his decisions.
• "Yelling at things" is not a strength or talent, and neither is "He wants to learn magic" a weakness or inability. Please fix these two things.
• Balance out your strengths and weaknesses. Good at "fighting" is vague, since there are a lot of fighting styles (archery, swordfight, hand-to-hand combat, etc.). Please include at least one more of each section.

You may re-apply in 24 hours from the point of this denial.

Do not hesitate to contact me if you need help or have any questions.

 

 

 

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This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.