Esterlen 4499 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Hi, here's my application thread. :) Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Taxidermist_Dave -How old are you?: 35. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I like to think I do. :) -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm wacky, occasionally funny, have the ability of a broken toaster when it comes to creative writing and dedicated. I'm also a huge fan of RP of any kind. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Oh, this is hard. I have a very fickle work schedule...I would say eight-ten hours minimum? Some times I may be on a -lot- more than that, sometimes a lot less. -How long have you played minecraft?: Since October last year. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: My definition of roleplaying is acting out a character that is not you, sort of like improvised acting. I've been doing it for about four years now - in forums, in World of Warcraft, in Guild Wars and other online games. (Usually in medieval settings.) -What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be wonderful. I've been looking for a good Minecraft RP servers for ages and this seems like the one. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on Tanelorn RP PvP and various other minor servers run by my friends. I left Tanelorn because there was little to none structured lore around the server and factions. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have. -Name the 4 races on this server. Elf, orc, dwarf, human. -How did you hear about us?: I've heard about you before but I never really took the time to apply - until the Yogscast favourited one of your trailers (Which I watched!) and decided I couldn't just stand around. -Did you vote?: I did. -What was your favourite Law?: The one which says you can not damage the landscape. This is an awesome one for me - it means incredible landscapes can go undamaged. -What was your least favourite Law?: None. They all seem reasonable. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Malythil. In-Character: -Character Name: Malythil Greensun. -What is your Race?: Elf. (Subrace: Wood elf.) -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Malythil. -Biography: Born to a pair of wood elf druids late in their lives, an only child, the most notable thing about Malythil was his raven black hair and it was not often a wood elf was born a brunette. He was raised like any other in Laurelin. He was a smart and quiet child - but in time, a lust for power grew within him that could not be quenched. There was no tragedy, no death and no pain in his childhood; for the most part he was spoilt - until he was forced to leave the home. Without his parents, he experienced the perilous world for himself - and he was unable to conquer it. Barely able to survive, he vowed one thing. One day, he would succeed. The world would all bow down to him - and he would do whatever possible to make that so. He thirsts for knowledge and power. -Character Age: If he was a human, around thirty. I don't really know elf age conventions on this server - if I'm just being plain ignorant, tell me! -Character Appearance: He's tall and thin, generally wears a traditional green and gold robe and has long black hair. Often has an expression of disdain on his face. -Character Personality: He is manipulative, independant, intelligent, ruthless, determined and logical. Somewhat cold, but not to the degree of evil. -Your ambitions: To someday be elected into the elven high council and perhaps even...the high prince. -Can your character read or write?: He can do both these very well. -Can your character mine?: No, digging is not exactly his cup of tea. -Are you a capable builder? Yes. -Can you wield a sword?: Yes. -Enjoy Farming?: No. -Does your character have any special skills?:] He's good with a bow, incredibly manipulative and good at lying. (He would make a good politician!). I was hoping for him to be some sort of wizard/druid if that would be possible. If not, well, that's okay! :D -A screenshot of your skin: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=30j0d9u&s=7 I can't take credit for this, it's an -amazing- skin I found on the LotC skin page which I recolored to make it have black hair. -Other Information: I've shown it all, I think! :D Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitebeard 126 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esterlen 4499 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Alright, I fixed the random bolding. I don't know why that was there - I must have just neglected to notice it. Anyway, I hope that was what was wrong with my application. :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esterlen 4499 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Bump. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petyr 485 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Your denial was probably more based on a short bio. And no, we don't really have magic yet :P Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esterlen 4499 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Your denial was probably more based on a short bio. And no, we don't really have magic yet :P Ah, okay. I didn't think it was that short - well, short enough to warrant a denial... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petyr 485 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Ah, okay. I didn't think it was that short - well, short enough to warrant a denial... Well to put it in perspective, a good bio is usually a detailed paragraph, preferably two. Crucial things are birthplace, upbringing, previous professions, important events, etc. Here is an example: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/7515-example-application-bubbli/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esterlen 4499 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Alright. Is it okay now? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petyr 485 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Yes, better. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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