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[SarahShadow101 8]

What’s your Minecraft account name? sarahshadow101

How old are you?: 14
What timezone are you in?: EST
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Metagaming is disallowed in its entirety. Metagaming is the use of information in roleplay that your character does not know. An example would be rallying troops to aid a friend even though your character would have no way to know he's in trouble.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Google search
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be someone else that you aren't or just putting yourself into another role you would otherwise not be able to be.
What is metagaming?: Obtaining information that isn't possible for your character to know in roleplay through outside sources or out of character means
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Doing things your character can't normally do or actions that are typically impossible or unlikely for your character to perform to the benefit of yourself and the detriment of others.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name:  Sarah Shadow
Character’s sex:  Female 
Character’s race:  Human
Character’s age:  14
Biography :

    My name is Sarah Shadow I am 14 years old. I was born in a town called Arcadia. Arcadia was the best home i could ever ask for. My town was filled only with Elf's And Humans. My Farther was a strong knight of the town and my mother was an elf. But  was a human. My momnever cared what race i was she just loved me for me. My birthday was on Oct 30. But the thing was.... When ever someone tired to talk to me..... I would ignore them..... going back into my past and friendships would always haunt me to death..... Anyways I wasnt really powerful that i think of it.... i knew how to protect myself.... but never good enough to become a knight..... Everyone wanted to be my friend.... But i always wanted to be in my world alone...... Im also the kind of person who has a hard time trusting people..... i dont have many things im good at.... im basicaly just good at mining and hunting.... i wasnt the best but i was okay.... back at my home land it would always snow everyday...... i loved the color white a lot.... many people think im dumb or stupid but i dont really care.... like at all...... im also the person who doesnt care about others feelings..... i always thought you should love yourself and only yourself..... many people made fun of me because i was like that.... but i didnt care..... i did have a bad child hood.... getting abused to death....... life was really hard for me.... this is wwhy i never trust anyone.... so with all of this... i ran away from my home...... thinking everything will be alright.... i thought mabye making a living of my own would be the best for me.... Ever... sences i left home..... life been kinda better.... many peope awlays stare at me when i go into towns and towns...... ive always never really care.... getting food was hard..... i would always eat berries i found in the woods... when ever i was sick i would always need to take care of myself.  when ever i looked at others i felt big... i was really big for my age.... people also made fun of me because of my blue hair..... i have a lot of scares all over my bodie..... i been into many fights....  there is only one thing i need to work on is my power..... i dont have a any... but i need more.... im not that powerfull at all.... but the thing i need to work on.... is friends..... i have like no friends..... no one to trust.... no one to look up on... thats why... i only love myself....

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reasons:

- PLAGIARIZED definitions.

- Your biography is lacking server lore

- In your biography you make reference to October which does not exist on the server

- Your character biography is incredibly hard to read because of how poorly structured it was.

- You are not allowed to apply for as character who is under 18 years old.

 

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt1

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.