[✗] [Pending] Re-Application

[AlvinSky225 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Alvin_Sky

How old are you?: 13

What timezone are you in?: Hong Kong (HK)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: the wars

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: By searching "Minecraft Role-play server" in google

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: To be the another character to have your own adventure.

What is metagaming?: A game with any strategy, action or method

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Its simplest form is the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alvin

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography: I'm Alvin, born in a village and lived in the sea. Friend with Elves and Dwarves.

  I love to make weapons like sword, bow, spear etc. and like to battle too!

Personality Traits: Kind

Ambitions: Be the legend.

Strengths/Talents: Magic

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Will be scare if I Battle with somethings stornger than me.

Appearance: tall: 1.84 m , hair color: Light Blue, cute , handsome.

Skin:

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reasons:

- All of your definitions are incorrect or vague and need to be redefined.

- Your character biography needs to be about 2 paragraphs long and include more server lore.

- Your character ambitions do not make sense.

- Your character strengths need to be elaborated on or changed because you cannot apply as a character with magical abilities.

- You need to include specific weaknesses that are unique to you character, being afraid of being demolished in a fight is a natural instinct.

- Your skin does not match the server setting of being medieval/fantasy because you have blue hair, a suit and bow-tie, and lack any details to support the setting it belongs in.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You do not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

 

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt1

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.