[✗] Aplication

[Shadowknight33 0]

out of character info

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Swimmingship9
How old are you?: 16
What timezone are you in?: MDT 
Are you aware the server is PG-13: yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Hostile and Toxic behavior, directed any anyone or on any medium, will not be tolerated.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found out about it from lots of searching on google and youtube for a good roleplay server.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):
Have you logged into the server yet?: yes
definitions
What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is acting out the role of a character designed to fit into the lore of a fictional world
What is metagaming?: metagaming is giving a character knowledge that is not yet known or not supposed to be known by that character
What is power-emoting (power gaming)?: power gaming is usually used in roleplaying games to maximize how fast the player gets to their goal by skipping things like actually roleplaying and storytelling.
character
Character’s name: Arceon
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: dark elf
Character’s age: 300 years 

Biography: Arceon has become a hired soldier that does what he needs to protect mainly himself. his family died of old age, and when they all did he went off to explore. He did this for no particular reason, just to see some sights. he hadn't known much about the dark elves lore. he had heard stories of them joining the high elves in a war out of fear. he had also heard of an age of fauna and foliage after something called "the emerald fires". The more stories he heard the more he was enticed about the lore of the dark elves. he also learned about magic and how wizards could summon fire and lightning from their fingertips. and so he sought out for the dark elves history and a magic school. during this journey, he came across bandits that cut off his left arm. he was fine but he did experience lots of blood loss. he continues his search but without his dominant hand and getting money off of being a hired soldier trained by his father he feels like he has wasted what he was given.

[Remyy 952]

Under Review

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Sadly your application has been denied for the following reason(s) below, yet do not fret applicant as this does not keep you from joining forever. You may reapply in 24 hours,

• Greetings applicant! you did not use the whole whitelist format, which is found here.
• It is extremely rare and strange your characters parents would have died from old age, considering elves live up to almost 1000.
• Your biography contains very little lore, and there is no current record of an event titled 'The emeires'.
• It does not explain why he was a hired soldier, or why he needed to protect himself. This could be a very interesting core part of your character, in your next application please explain it!

If you have any questions and or concerns please do not hesitate to send me a PM via going to my profile, and using the message button! You may reapply in 24 hours.

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.