[✗] [Pending] application

[cooldude32 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:cooldude3223
What timezone are you in?:mountain time
How old are you?:15
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the committee conduct
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: looking for cool role playing servers
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):unsure what this means
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes


Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application!

What is roleplaying?:were take a role some one you came up with and play as them
What is metagaming saying stuff outside of roleplay
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:it means that you are acting with words example thomas slashed down to kill his enemy

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) thomas
Character’s sex: (male or female?)male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)human
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)21
Biography: last of a knight order known as the black swords that was wiped out in 1578 by dread knights when he was 17 . no one escaped except thomas but not with taken a injure they blinded him in one eye luky he was nused back to health in a small town near Holy Orenian Empire.now hes a wandereing swords man but he still wares the armor of his oder to reminde him of his comrades

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)likes to help and fight with a sword dislikes anything that causes harm to the innocent habits always swipes sword across when it is drawn
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)to be a grand knight
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)very skilled with a sword and battle strategies
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)bad with bows and weekend by magic
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) white hair 6 foot scar on left eye
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Vaynth 3005]

 

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

• Your metagaming and power-emoting definitions were incorrect. Please have a look at our own definitions. Remember to put them into your own words.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

• Expand on your biography. We expect it to have two lengthy paragraphs and at least three references to server lore. Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. (For this you will need the Wiki!)  Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

   

  Explain your character in detail.

  Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

• You did not make the necessary changes within the 24 hour time period.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.