[✗] [Pending] SwiftySwoo Whitelist Application

[SwiftySwoo 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: SwiftySwoo

What timezone are you in?: Eastern Standard Time

How old are you?: 14 (almost 15)

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Harassment

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I saw the server on Youtube and I thought I was going to try-out for the server, as I was already looking for an RPG server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act as a character in an imaginary world.

What is metagaming?: When a person knows information that the character doesn't and using it as an advantage

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: When a character surpasses what should be normal (AKA. Overpowered)

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Sonagh

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Orc (uruk)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 40

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

     I was born in Vailor, San'Thraka, 1955. Growing up I was an unusually lonely uruk, growing in my own world.  I did not have many friends, or any at that.  As all of the other orcs my age roughhoused and hunted animals, I observed them from a distance. As we all got older, I grew farther and farther apart from the group, and eventually stopped talking o others overall.  One day I was out hunting in the wild and I noticed that some of my childhood friends were attacked by a band of stray boars.  Before I knew it I was running in with just my bare-hands which was unlike me.  I tackled the largest boar I could see, and ripped at its skin, tearing away at the fatty flesh.  I had successfully killed the boar but with a grave consequence, one last boar had jumped at me, slashing the entirety of my chest and abdomen. I don't remember much of the incident but, I remember waking up in an unfamiliar hut, surrounded by my childhood buddies.  After the incident, I had this great feeling that I still want to grasp, a feeling that compels me to become greater.  As of today, I strive to help others, although in my own way, silently and unnoticed. 

      

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Restrained, observative, and quick-witted

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) To find a place to call home

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Scouting and Hunting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Cooking, farming, and other utilities.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Height: 5'7" | Hair: I is bald I is handsome | Scars: Large scar on Chest/Abdomen

 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

Note: Skin will be updated soon

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 12 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Please include more Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for orcs can be found on the Wiki ( https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Orcs )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 12 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.