appllication for minecraft server

[CountJuno88 230]

Denied.

Reasons why your application has been denied may include the following:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

[MoroseChaos 0]

Out-Of-Character: micah

-Minecraft Account Name: minercraft901

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: america centeral time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i like minecraft. im nice to every one i meet. and im helpful.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: a days worth usally

-How long have you played minecraft?: 6 months atleast

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: that roleplaying is when you act as not realality but as a life you control and do amy thing you imagion. not so long really i can

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a nice fun community to play minecraft

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: a blackout server and stil play it, and a adventure server but left do to majerity of greifers and rude admins.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes ands yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. human, elves, dwarfs , and orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: youtube yogcast led to a trailer looked fun and i looked at other people videos.

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?: no greifing

-What was your least favourite Law?: cant really find one

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? minercraft901

In-Character: in charecter what?

-Character Name: drake

-What is your Race?: human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: minercraft901

-caracter Biography: raised as a farmer who would hunt pigsfor meat then joined a kingdom to become a archer and one of the best later felt a distink traiter to find that the ruler

-Character Age: 19

-Character Appearance: brown nice hair a musucler build 6 ft tall

-Character Personality: nice ussally has caution with strangers

-Your ambitions: to have fun playing the server

-Can your character read or write?: yes and yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder? a real good buileder

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:] great with a bow

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/userskins/man_in_a_hood_by_jackie1st.png

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