[✗] [Pending] Niblic's Application

[Dr Alto Clef 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Niblic

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 19

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cheating and harrassment.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A guy named cptCASINO

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): No

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Controlling a character to tell a story with other people.

What is metagaming?: Using information only attainable through out of character means for in-character purposes

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Forcing an outcome to an RP situation on another person against their will.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Tonyl Runph

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) High Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 70

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Tonyl Runph was a member of a noble dynasty known as the House of Ẃydth and the lord of a once prosperous kingdom known as Usonia. During his rule, he brought the kingdom back to greatness by expelling the hated Mullah from the land and was described as constructing a great edifice of embankment to prevent their incursion. He was also credited for the revision of disastrous asclepian laws enacted by his predecessor and the withdrawal of controversial trade negotiations with foreign states. Unfortunately, political conspirators puppeteered the peasant population into conflict and strife with lies and half-truths, and the kingdom was torn asunder less than a fourth of a decade into Tonyl's rule. Tonyl Runph was exiled and forced to roam the land in search of a new life.

 

During his travels across the deserts of Tahn, he came across an undead shaman known as Darr Taplajis. Tonyl Runph had never heard of this wise wizard, for the legends of Taplajis were not ones told by the natives in Runph's homeland of Gede. The shaman sat down, gave Runph some bread, and began telling him his tale. Darr Taplajis was a dark shaman from the far-away land of Asheyth, so wise and so powerful he could create life using the force of his will. He had such knowledge of the dark arts that he could even keep the ones he loved from dying. The dark arts that Taplajis practiced were a pathway to many abilities, abilities some considered to be profane. He became so imbued with power that the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which he did, eventually. Unfortunately, he revealed unto his apprentice all of the knowledge he had accrued, then he was betrayed by him; killed in his slumber. He could protect the ones he loved from the grips of death, but became prey to it in the end.

 

Runph was enthralled and asked the shaman where a man like him could learn to harness these dark arts. The wizened shaman, gazed at him with his ethereal eyes, and said that people from Runph's homeland could not learn this power. Runph became enraged and attempted to strike him down, but quickly lost his high ground advantage and was cursed by the shaman with disgusting jaundiced skin, before disappearing.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Adjusted, ambitious, direct, and imprudent. Often makes impulsive decisions without consulting others. Enjoys spending time at the whorehouse, but stays away from alcohol. Probably enjoys his own voice too much.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He aspires to regain control of his kingdom and lead it back to prosperity, but must start from the bottom.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Negotiations, trading, economics.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Trusts people too much. Highly vengeful and finds it difficult to forgive people who deceive him.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 6′ 3″. Pale hair. Slightly miscolored skin, cursed by an undead shaman.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://i.imgur.com/IhRJr9X.png

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Under Review.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Placed on Pending because you have created an interesting character biography but you are going to have to use more existing lore from the server rather than making up dynasties and kingdoms that never existed. Also I am fairly confident that there has never and cannot be a necromancer that is also a druid, perhaps a dark shaman may fit the needs that you can put in your story.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to make the needed updates that were expressed 24+ hours ago.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.