[✗] [Pending] Ederlvy's Whitelist app

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:

Ederlvy

What timezone are you in?:

CST

How old are you?:

18

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Fully aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

I have indeed

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Agreeing to a rule is like picking and choosing which to follow, though my favorite rule is the time to wait on a war. 4-5 days between each

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:

my friend Dishearted (pretty sure that is her MC name)

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):

I do believe I have. Though might have been before I got my MC name changed by a trolly friend

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:

Roleplaying, the act of playing a character that you are not.

What is metagaming?:

Using Out of Character information to your In character advantage

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:

Playing an unkillable char, or forcing emotes upon another player, Example being "Billy kills Joe by instantly chopping his head off with a Horizontal axe sword swing!"

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)

Hazen Churn

Character’s sex: (male or female?)

Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)

Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

31

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Hazen had been born within a small settlement, 31 years before current events, living and rising with his family (unsure of servers current year, I could not find it) Rising within his family, he would often be seen aiding around the house, and helping his father chop wood for fires, or hunt for food. Though, reaching his teens he had started to grow fascinated with his towns guardsmen, always admiring how they operate and function, how well in unison they move. Eventually, as time grown, he would find himself joining the ranks of the guardforce he had admired as a child, leaving home for his mother and father to be taken care by his youngest sister.

Several years passed as he, now reaching the age of 29, decided to leave his small town guard force and head else where, places to where he could rise through ranks by showing his skills to others. Finding his way to the land, now the age of 31, he seeks the very job he adored as a child, Guardship.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

Dislikes the sea

Enjoys horseback

Honorable

Loyal

Devoted

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

A guard, or bannerman

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)

Dueling, Drawing, Being assertive and in command, Following orders.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)

Archery, Far eye sight, Talking to women(he is bad at it)

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)
Hazen would be a brownhaired, 6ft man. He having little to no big injuries. Though lining his right cheekbone would be a long and thin scar, seemingly old and forgotten from age. His body would be of an athletic build, his eyes a soft blue to green, His skin tanned by the sun.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

http://imgur.com/a/kRkW6

[Pieman 1134]

Under Review.

[Pieman 1134]

 

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

 

 -Your (roleplaying/metagaming/power-emoting) definition(s) are vague. Please correct them using the definitions that are on the LotC Wiki (the definitions will be located just to the right under 'New Player Information'. Remember to write them in your words

 

- Explain your character in detail with more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today 

 

-Please include more server lore into your biography. Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Pieman 1134]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to make the required changes.

 

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

 

 

 

[Pieman 1134]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.