[✗] [Pending] Marcus's Whitelist Application

[BiSc0 2]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: BiSc0

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Im aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Generally metagaming rule, it get’s annoying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Everything is clear

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking for a rp server on youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing is creating a imaginary character and creating a story for said character

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is taking knowledge you gained oocly, information such as from a friend from skype, teamspeak, …).

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is being someone who can't be beaten or do thing that his character shouldn’t be able to. A simple example as in: *Marcus stands up, forwarding his knife into the enemy's chest, killing him in one go*

 

Character’s name: Marcus Nightingale

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

 

Biography:

Marcus was a young lad born in the year of 1564. Himself and his parents lived at a rather small house at a town called Felson, that was with the Oren Empire. Marcus liked to draw in his young ages, he wasn’t a natural talent but this a lot during his free time, it could be called a hobby. His father Alar Nightingale taught him how to handle a sword, however despite the amount of time Marcus brought into drawing made him inaccurate with the handling of combat. Other then that he was fairly unknown for the Isles of Vailor.

 

At Marcus young times he met a few people, the most notable one was a blind, and apparently very small lass called Elise. She being a close friend for marcus as the friendship started out with just ‘making a drawing’. They both departed when the descendant races left Vailor to go towards the Isles of Axios

 

Likes: Swords, tea, and drawing

Dislikes: Seeing people suffer, carrots, and rude Nobleman

Habits: Draws pictures of people and places and hunting.

Ambitions: A father, a good friend to someone, and be a good guy

Strengths: Sturdy, patience, observant

Talents: Drawing, and singing

Weaknesses: Can't hold alcohol, flirts a lot, and nosy. And a little weak in ‘combat’, generally.

Appearance: Green eyes, dark hair, and mercenary looking armor.

Skin: https://gyazo.com/bf405a30bd675cc4fb8f86d8bc6d988a

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• Please expand on your metagaming and powergaming definitions, as they are rather vague. You may use our own wiki definitions as reference, just remember to put them into your own words.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
   
• Your biography is much too short-- we expect at least two lengthy paragraphs. Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• Failed to make the required changes within a 24 hour period.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.