[✗] [Pending] White's Whitelist app

[WhiteLightning 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: WhiteLightning

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Writing in english.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): none

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?: stepping into the shoes of another

What is Metagaming?: using ooc info icly

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: forcing an action upon another player

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Remus Blackreich

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24

Biography  (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore): Remus Schneffer von Blackreich IV was born 25 years ago, brought up by a modest family in a southern vineyard. Remus grew to love wine, tasting many vintages throughout his adolescence and upbringing. His parents’ modest wealth afforded him a swordplay tutor, and he was taught to fight with a mace and shield from ages 12 to 18. With occasional outings to the local city to sell their family's wine, the young Remus grew to be quite well rounded for a member of lower gentry, learning trade from his father and his numbers and letters from tutors. He grew to have a healthy obsession with fitness, loving to jog and run about, full with youthful energy. When he turned sixteen, his parents saw fit to send him to deliver barrels of wine to their customers, hoping to show him more of the world. Remus was quite taken with the Industrious nature of the city, and was quickly swept up in it. After delivering the wine, he set the coin for the payment aside, as he was not one to spend money that was not his, and went off to have a night of wondrous fun. He woke up twelve hours later with a pounding headache while lying in a ditch with no pants. As he dragged himself out of the ditch, he slowly made his way back to the inn where he was staying, donning a fresh pair of clothes, and burning the rest of the horribly stained attire. He returned home with the money from the wine sale, but a significantly lighter personal fund. Throughout the years, he maintained his love of exercise, dallying with a few peasant girls. His eye never truly stopped upon any of them, and as he had not met a woman of sufficient noble birth to marry, he had to follow the custom of his forefathers.  It was then that he reached the point where in every man’s life, that they must leave home to make their own way in the world. When Remus turned twenty, following the tradition of his family, dating back to his great great grandfather, He kissed his mother goodbye, and gave his father a firm handshake. He set off to found another vineyard, and yet, his searches continue to this very day.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He loves exercise, wine, and is a very outgoing person.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He wishes to open his own vinyard.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Winemaking, fighting.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Other than winemaking, no other prominent skills.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Short blond hair, blue eyes, an angular face. He'd be approximately 6' tall, and would have a stocky build.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Vaynth 3005]

 

 

 

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

 

• Your definitions for roleplaying, metagaming, and power-emoting are rather vague. Please explain them more thoroughly. 

• There needs to be at least one reference to server lore within your biography. You can find lots of good resources within our LoTC wiki, as well as the Forums. Feel free to message me or any of the other available Application Moderators if you would like assistance.

• Expand on your character's strengths and weaknesses. It's comprehensible that he has an affinity for wine, but I would like to know a little bit more about him.
   
• The biography mentioned your persona wanting to be with a noble woman. It's not entirely clear whether he is or otherwise, but one may not apply with a character of noble descent. 

 

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

• Failed to make necessary changes to the application within a 24 hour period.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.