[✗] [Pending] Varien's Appliancation

[Varien111 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Rmbled
What timezone are you in?:UTC+00:00
How old are you?:16
Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The Lawless Raiding rule,
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:My friend told me about it
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):No
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is Roleplaying?:The act of playing the role of and impersonating as a character
What is Metagaming?:The act of communicating with someone using a non-roleplay way {Discord, Skype, Team-speak etc}
What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?:The act of his/her action being successful without letting the other player's character respond.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Taurus Silver
Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Farfolk Human
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)20
Biography  (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they travelled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)Taurus's family originates from Caliphate (Sultanate), a land far away from where he currently is in the Grand Kingdom of Urguan in hope to start a new life in these strange lands to carry his father's  legacy as a legendary blacksmith and to bring fortune back to his homeland to show the people how good life is here. He is currently 20 years old having no faith in Islam unlike his people but does have in interest in the Church of the Human race in which he hopes to be friendly with.  He has a grown interest into Dwarven architecture and culture ever since he arrived at the mountain fort of Aegis. I knew times will be tough now since I first arrived on the island with the ever growing conflicts going around, only get worse and more troubling but I must stand strong, use my father's teaching to become as legendary as he once was.
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Likes so show to the tiniest of details in weapons , Tools, Structures etc
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)A blacksmith and enchanter
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Blacksmithing and Enchanting [bartering]
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Farming and Breeding [strength and archery]
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair colour?; scars?) Tall, tanned skin, dark hair, rough hands, purple eyes 
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Pieman 1134]

Under Review

[Pieman 1134]

 

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

 

Your (roleplaying/metagaming/power-emoting) definition(s) are vague and incorrect. Please correct them using the definitions that are on the LotC Wiki (the definitions will be located just to the right under 'New Player Information'.

 

-Please try your best to fix the biography in your Application which includes;

Grammar

Refer to your Character in third person.

Expand on your biography making it one thorough paragraph long.

 

-Please explain your Character in detail;

Personality traits

Appearance

 

-Please add more strenghts/weaknesses and make them even.

 

-Provide us your Character's skin so we can review it. 

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Tip; I suggest that you take your time and check how other Applications are done before you start editing yours. You can find all accepted Applications here.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Pieman 1134]

 

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to make the required changes. If you need help or if you have any further questions, feel free to message me through LoTC Forums.

Please take your time, re-read the rules and LoTC Wiki.  I suggest you check how other Applications are done before you apply once again.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

You can re apply in 3 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[Pieman 1134]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.