[✗] [Pending] GorfTech's WhiteList App

[GorfTech 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: GorfTech

What timezone are you in?: Est

How old are you?: 16

 

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: We punish any trolling or memeing in roleplay or excessive use in out-of-character

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A Youtube video

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

Definition

What is Roleplaying?: Roleplaying is playing or acting like a fictional character. When roleplaying you take on the persona of the character, acting like them and only acting with the knowledge that they have. 

 

What is Metagaming?: Metagaming is when your character has the knowledge that in-game they would not know but they get it from outer worldly beings a.k.a there friends on skype and they say it in chat but shouldn’t because it mess up the story line

 

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Power-emoting is forcing an action upon another player, not giving them a chance to respond. (i.e George stabs beca in the back killing her) instead of (i.e George tries stabbing beca in the back but she sees him in a mirror and reacts)

 

Character

Character’s name: Voraor Thennur

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark elf

Character’s age: 57

 

Biography: Voraor was born in 1857. His home city is Ker'nor. Voraor was never as lucky as most dark eleven Children he was dress differently and never really belonged. He never wore fancy cloths or had a nice house he lived in the slums of Ker'nor with his parents and some other family's that he never really seen. Voraor was always interested in the magical arts but his parent forbid him to see anyone with the magical arts and learn any arts. After he turned 30 he started to steal from people to help feed his family after 2 years of pick-pocketing and lock-picking he was a well known thief in on his street. when Voraor turned 37 he tried to steal the relic of his nation but  he didn’t realize it was being transferred that day and it was being heavily guarded on when he tried to take it he was caught and was put in jail for 20 years when he was in prison he heard new from one of the guards that Voraor was friends during thieving operations that gets gold in hi pockets from time to time told him that they found his parent died from a virus that was going around.

 

Personality Traits: he hate other thieves because there competition, he like merchants that look the other way when he sells goods,hates most of the guards in the cities. 

 

Ambitions: he’s inspired to become the most infamous thief in the isles with the help of magic. Once he learns it. Voraor in also trying to make a thieves Guild in one of the main cities to become one of the richest and most feared thief to ever live in the isles.

 

Strengths/Talents: charismatic,good at lock-picking and pick-pocketing,has good swordsmanship and bowman-ship.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: bad in melee mountain combat,easy to provoke,he can keep his drinks down

 

Appearance: Dark red eyes with white shoulder lengthen hair and beard his skin is a moderately light gray,has a black blouse with black leather pants that are held up by a leather belt and black leather boots and leather gloves. He wears his uncle's old sword sheath over his upper body (chest area). his height is 5'10 and his weight is 120.

Skin:http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/requested-11151127.png

 

[AfricanGlasses 111]

Hey there! your app is being put on PENDING.

 

Please make these changes:

1) Include one piece of lore in your biography (Source the WIKI for help)

2) fine tune your definitions. Feel free to poke around at accepted applications. 

3) your ambitions are a bit "cliché". Can you think of any others?

 

 

You have 24 hours to make these corrections! If you need any help at all, feel free to reach me via forum pm's and I will happily assist you! Good luck and have a great one.

 

 

[AfricanGlasses 111]

Hey there!

 

After reading over your application, I'm going to be [Denying] the second attempt. You can apply again, however for the time being you have not met the requirements needed to be processed through to roleplaying on lord of the craft.

 

For your next application, please keep in mind:

 

1) Your ambitions need to match with lore: Making a guild for the purpose of terrorizing others and stealing to make money won't be allowed in major roleplay hubs/cities.

2) Your biography needs to reflect roleplay lore from our wiki page (With correct dates/years)

3) your strengths and weaknesses should be personal and not so cliché to the LotC community. A ton of people just reflect on fighting and making money when in reality, theres so much more to do.

 

 

If you have any questions feel free to msg me on forums and we can get your second app running. Have a good night.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.