[✗] [Pending] Application

[xXBlueXx 0]

Minecraft Username: Dark_Angel01

Time zone: PST

Age: 15

Awareness to inappropriate interactions: I am aware

Agreement to rules: I agree

Most Agreeable rule: NO cyber-bullying 

Confusing rules: None

How I found Lotc: My friend told me about it

Past applications: Tc application

Have I logged into the server: I have not

What is roleplay: To make and play as a unique character and for you to give the reactions of what you think your character might do.

What is metagaming: Using information that shouldn't be used in-game or to use information to get help or help other people.

What is powergaming: When you try to give yourself powers and abilities that you aren't allowed to use or that are very overpowered.

Character name: Silver Moon

Gender: Female

Race: human

Age: 27

Biography: Silver Moon was born in 1606, she recently moved to Santegia. She knows nothing of her past. Since she knows nothing of her past she decides to stay in Santegia and start fresh there. She also wants to regain her memories if possible. She wants to regain her memories to know what happened to her and why she has a blind eye. She also wants to know about her family and who she really was before she lost everything. Silver is nervous nobody will accept her and she decides to keep to herself.  If people didn't accept her she would be afraid to leave and have nowhere else to go. 

Ambitions: To regain her memories

Strengths/Talents: Weaponry, being silent

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not being accepted, talking about her past since she doesn't know it 

Appearance: 5'6, one blind eye and one green eye, silver hair, thin yet a bit toned muscle wise

Skin: see image

[AfricanGlasses 111]

Under Review

PENDING

 

Hey there! I'm going to be putting your application on pending and not because you've done anything incorrect, I just need you to beef up your biography just a bit. You knocked the hard part out, which is adding a piece of lore (which you did by mentioning Santegia), but just throw in a personal touch, make sure that you are giving a wholesome story about your character! Why does she feel excluded? Why does she want her memories back? How does she know she had any memory to begin with? Simple stuff like that. Super easy fix, maybe 1-3 more sentences and you'll be good to go!

 

Also, the year is 1633. If your character was born in 1600 she'd be 33, not 27 c:

 

If you need any help whatsoever, feel free to reach me on my personal discord at jackmmills30582 OR on forums through PM's. 

 

Have a great day.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

The applicant has an EXTRA HOUR. If no communication arises, they will be put on denied and will have to re-apply. The initial timeframe of 24 hours is up.

 

If any extension is needed, please let me know as soon as possible.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.