[✗] [Pending]Whitelist Application

[Aregorm 0]

Minecraft name: "Aregorm"

Age: 14

Timezone: CEST

Have you read rules and agreed them? Yes.

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13: Yes

What's the rule you agree with the most?: "When gathering resources, you must clean up any floating leaves or stone"

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense?: No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a medieval/fantasy server on the Internet

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications: None

Have you logged into the server yes?: Yes

 

What is roleplaying?: It is playing a role of a character who isn't you.

What is powergaming?: It is forcing another player to some action. Example of powergaming "/me slices you in half, obviously you can not instantly slice someone in half. If they have a weapon they could parry it, if they have HEAVY armor they wouldn't be sliced in half, probably just cut or so".

What is metagaming?: It is using knowledge out of game in game / using knowledge outside of your character's knowledge

 

Character's name: Aregorm

Character's sex: Male

Character's race: Human, Highlanders(if I have to precise Kaedrin)

Character's age: 30

 

Biography: Aregorm was born in 1597. He lived peacefully with his parents. When he was 15, Orcs attacked his house. Because they needed slaves they captured him and his parents. While they were in captivity his father taught him how to fight with sword. They tried to escape about 200 times. When Aregorm was 22, they tried again. This time they were lucky and freed themselves. When Orcs saw Aregorm's (and his family) missing, they started looking for them. They found his parents. They were really angry so they killed Aregorm's parents. Aregorm run away. Then he started his 5 years journey. When he arrived to first city he found, he started working in some farmer's field. He worked there for 2 months. For his work he received a lot of food and a map. With a map he went back home.
When he came back home he hunted for food and worked on his field. Every day he trained fighting with the sword and bow.

 

Personality Traits: He is very introverted. He likes his home and hates Orcs.

Ambitions: He wants to avenge his parents death.

Strengths/Talent: He is great at fighting with the sword and bow.

Weakness/Inabilities: He is weak at Alchemy and magic.

Appearance: He is 6ft. He has very dark brown eyes. He has brown hair. He wears leather clothes.

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.
 

-Please add some server lore to your character's biography, such as where he came from, or what cities he interacted with.

-Your character's biography is far too short, and doesnt really explain how he gt to the point where he is today. where'd he get any of these fighting skills? Why did orcs capture him? How come he was successful where he failed 200 times?

 

-You have 24 hours to remedy the listed problems, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

 

 

 

-Though you fixed parts of your application, even more issues have started to arise.

 

 -Please add some server lore to your character's biography, such as where he came from, or what places he went.

-You still didnt explain how or why your character managed to succeed where he previously failed 200 times to escape, or why they killed his parents if they were in heavy need of the slaves. (this also begs the question why they would kill the parents if they were in heavy need of slaves.)

 

-Having ones parents randomly killed by orcs than vowing revenge is unfathomably cliche, and overused. IF you wish for your character's parents to be killed off unneededly, please atleast provide a more original source for your character's parents' random demise.

 

-The sense of orientation is moreso a sense in which one understands how their body is oriented, and the relation of distance and position of each parts of the body. Though there is debate on whether there is a sense in humans that allows one to be able to navigate in a migratory manner similar to birds, such has never been proven, and such claims of such have been brushed off as false by the general scientific community from the research I've done.

 

-You have 24 hours from the below 'edited on' date (this being 10/29 at 7:57pm EST for me) to make the needed changes, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM if you have any questions,

 

 

-You failed to make the needed changes I asked within 24 hours.

 

-You may re-apply in 1 hour from this denial.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.