[✗] [Pending]SHIFTER113's APPLICATION

[JalenEisenhorn 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:SHIFTER113

What timezone are you in?:central

How old are you?:20

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You must be at least 13 to be apply):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:power gaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:Friends who play

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):no but i will here in a sec

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?: Taking on the character you create and living in the world around them

What is Metagaming: Using ooc info ic

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Forcing actions on other characters

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jalin Eisenhorn

 

Character’s sex: (Male)

 

Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf

 

Character’s age: 139

 

Biography: Son of the great dwarf Krane Eisenhorn, Jalen Eisenhorn was brought up as a fighter never to fear anyone and to honor the eisenhorn name. As a child Jalen was forced to undergo secret combat training by his father in hopes that he would lead in combat like in the glory days. After his 130th birthday Jalen set off from his small village near Aegisian to join his brothers and cousins in Axios to claim honor in the armies of the dwarves.

 

Personality Traits: Leader, Warrior, loyal to  a fault, is straightforward and completes tasks at all cost

Strengths/Talents: Great Hunter, Trained to follow and lead as a soldier, blacksmith

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: loyal to his men and his clan to a fault

 

Appearance: with long brown hair with a red beard and clasped in iron armor

Skin:  http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/11138096/boindil-of-the-north/

 

[E__V__O 2000]

 

Alright, so your application, it incomplete the format you have used is missing some things. Specifically;

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Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizingwill result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?:

What is Metagaming?:

What is Power-emoting(Powergaming)?:

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Can you explain a place within Axios, city name, town, ext within your biography, you can find it out here:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Axios

Or specifically dwarven here:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dwarves

 

Added onto this, the skin you have linked. I don't have access as it redirects me to a planet minecraft page with no clear visible skin if you can fix this issue it'll be good.

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes, contact me when finished.

[E__V__O 2000]

Sorry for the late response. 

 

 

The app is denied for : two reaons.

1. The definitions you wrote need to be more detailed.
2. The skin, I still cannot access the page you linked.

You can reapply in 6 hours.

[E__V__O 2000]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.