[✗] [Pending] AtlasPsychos Whitelist application

[AtlasPsycho 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:AtlasPsycho

What timezone are you in?: UTC+0

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You must be at least 13 to apply):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Combat Rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No thanks

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

 

What is Roleplaying?: role-playing is the art of taking the role of a different person and playing it.

What is Metagaming?: metagaming is when a someone knows something that their rp character isnt supposed to know for exemple " yeah jimmy is creating a rebellion to  kill the king" peasent "oh ok"Guard, next day "jimmy you are here by because of treason for wanting to kill the king and starting a rebellion" Guard

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: power gaming i what someone does when they dont care about interaction they only care about getting the story done or leveling up to max level

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Ashnac

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Uruk

Character’s age: 35

 

Biography: Ashnac is from a family of warriors from Tahn , Ashnac's family was one of the familys that participated in the many wars of Axios although they started disappearing after the Grand Kingdom of Urguan being dissolved and conquered, Ashnac's family was one of the many family's that destroyed Urguan, the few dwarfs that survived started hunting Ashnac many other orc familys down, during Ashnac's father and mother last stand from the dwarfs the decided to hid in a nearby destroyed town after some time Ashnac's parents noticed that the dwarfs wouldn't enter that town, in the meanwhile Ashnac and his mother Bashuk started to explore the town Ashnac told his mother that he saw a dark figure so they went both to investigate, when they got closer they saw it was a wraith and not a normal human being Bashuk then started running to Xorag aka Ashnac's father, but they were to late the wraith already had found Xorag and took control of him making deep wounds on him and his wife, for a brief second Ashnac's mother said for him to run to a nearby cave and only come out when they said shortly after Ashnac's parents died, Ashnac  was 10 when that all happend, Ashnac lived in that cave only with a few supplys and the weekly wild animals that walked into that cave, after 5 years Ashnac was found has a 15 years old uruk in a cave by a uruk raiding party, now Ashnac lives as a lone warrior and seeks to find a clan to complete him.

Personality Traits: Ashnac quirks are bold, uninhibited and generous; ; Ashnac is frightened by ghostly figures like Wraiths ; Ashnac likes the thrill of the hunt and hunting down other races, dislikes when and orc or other races fight dirty.

 

Ambitions: Ashnac is aspired to find a clan.

 

Strengths/Talents: Ashnac is talented in the art of the axe and using big weapons like battleaxes and he is a very Honest person

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Ashnac has a scared eye so he cant see very well, Ashnac is prejudiced of people who deal with magic even shamans

 

Appearance:Green Dark skinned uruk about 8 feet tall, black coloured hair, and one scar on the eye.

Skin: 

[Riftblade 856]

Under review.

[Riftblade 856]

Pending-

 

Your application is pending for the following reasons:

- Your definition of powergaming and metagaming are inncorrect, please make the needed corrections

- Where exactly was your Orc born? Where on Axios?

- Uruk are simply Uruk

- Great Eagles do not exist

-Your weakness isn't a weakness, it's more of an ambition

- Please use server lore, the wiki is a great source of information

 

You have 24 hours to make the needed edits. Send a message once you've done so or have any questions.

[Riftblade 856]

Please make a few more edits-

 

- Do not copy and paste the definition of powergaming from another site, make your own definition for it

- Why did your family mostly disappear after Urguan fell, what was the connection between an orcish family and dwarven kingdom, please explain more

- Why is your persona afraid of Wraiths or other ghost like entities, is this due to something in their past?

- Give some personality strengths and flaws

[Riftblade 856]

Denied.

 

You may reapply in 3 hours.

[Riftblade 856]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.