L0key application fix

[L0key 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: L0key

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Time (US & Canada)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I like to think I do. But I only human and will occasionally make a grammatical or spelling error.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like to play lots of different video games and I am very big on science. Also I enjoy RP very much.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I can play for many many hours weekly.

How long have you played minecraft?: at least a year

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that when roleplaying you shod always stay in character. I have not been playing RP vary long but I cot on vary fast like a duke to water.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be a very fun experience where I can meet lots of new people.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have not been on a good server ever all of them were rely bad and did not run very well.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:I have read the rules and I think they reasonable. As for the lore I think it is will written.

Name the 4 races on this server.: human, elf, orc, and dwarf

How did you hear about us?: I was on the Yogscast channel on YouTube and they had liked a video so I looked up the server and I thought that it was jest what I was looking for.

Did you vote?:yes

What was your favorite Law?:you must keep in character

What was your least favorite Law?: I like all the laws

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:L0key

In-Character:

Character Name: Chiron the Merciless

What is your Race?: orc

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: L0key

Biography: when Chiron was jest a baby his small village was attacked by the undead. It was horrible. His mother and father new that no one would live throw the night. So Chiron’s mother toke hem to a human town not far from the village that they often traded with. There she toke hem to a family of nobility that she was good friends with. They adopted Chiron. He learned the skills he would need including reading writing and several others. However they also had him learn the art of war something he was very good at. He was also vary interested in politics. Then at the age of 16 he was drafted into the human army where he thrived. There he grew strong and smarter. He went up in the ranks of the army eventually becoming the second in command and was heed of the army’s combat strategy. Then at 18 an there was an attack agents Al'Khazar. The undead had come. Chiron had everything planed out nothing could go wrong. Then the unthinkable happened. The general was killed by a traitor living Chiron in charge of the army. Then he forced them out of the city and he had one but something happened. A fire was ignited in his hart and he chased them he chased them bake to there bass signal handedly killing 10 more undead. For these he was given the title of the Merciless. They even held a ceremony for hem but he did not come instead he left the humans so he may reconnect with the orcs.

Character Age: 21

Character Appearance: a tall orc with red eyes and scar on his left eye. Also he wars a robe that he toke from a undead he killed that he had altered to fit hem.

Character Personality: smart but devilish

Your ambitions: I hope to start by opening a shop to make minas to support myself then take to the Rex and try to start a intelligent part of the orc army.

Can your character read or write?: yes both

Can your character mine?:not vary will

Are you a capable builder?: he can build but I am not the best

Can you wield a sword?: with great passion

Enjoy Farming?: not vary much but I can if he will must

Does your character have any special skills?: yes he is vary skilled ant the art of battle strategy and politics.

A screenshot of your skin:

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