BobGraditelj (Brandon the Black) Application

[BobGraditelj 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: BobGraditelj

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time/ United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, but I am human, so I do make mistakes once in a while.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a student and I enjoy playing video games as well as sports. I wish I could spend more time playing video games but unfortunately I do need to do school work.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can probably be on the server 10-15 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing minecraft for about 5 months

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I know that the goal of role playing is to be able to step into a new world with a new character and have fun with the experience.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be a lot of fun because of the atmosphere created by the other players on the server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on ‘the shaftlands’ as well as my own server. I left these because they did not give me the experience that I desired.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Elves, Dwarves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: I heard about this server from the trailer on youtube that was ‘liked’ by BlueXephos

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: BobGraditelj

In-Character:

-Character Name: Brandon the Black

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: An orphan from a far off land, Brandon raised himself on the streets, teaching himself the skills needed to survive. At the age of 16, after trying out several professions and with no one offering him an apprenticeship, Brandon became a mercenary. With little to lose, Brandon went out and fought for whoever would pay him the most. He quickly earned the nickname Brandon the Black due to his dark hair and clothing, and became infamous among soldiers. He is known as one of the best in the business. It is said see before Brandon kills you is a flash of black followed by a flash of steel, despite his reputation, one day he passed out after being injured in a large battle. He wakes up to find himself in a strange temple...

-Character Age: 22

-Character Appearance: Brandon is light skinned, has long scraggly black hair, and a full beard. He wears a black vest over a dark grey shirt, and wears black pants and dark grey boots.

-Character Personality: Brandon is always very calm and composed, some say he is as cool as the sword he wields. Brandon the Black keeps most of his thoughts and emotions to himself. He will not help or hinder any events occurring unless there is a reward involved.

-Your ambitions: Brandon hopes to become rich and powerful enough to have a castle of his own and not have to take orders from anyone.

-Can your character read or write?: Brandon can barely read and write.

-Can your character mine?: Although he can mine if absolutely necessary, Brandon prefers trading.

-Are you a capable builder?: Brandon can build smaller structures to house himself, but is not good at building large ones.

-Can you wield a sword?: Brandon can wield a sword better than most, and is a seasoned warrior.

-Enjoy Farming?: Brandon does not know how to farm.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Very good with a sword.

-A screenshot of your skin: My link

-Other Information: none.

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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