sabermark application

[sabermark 0]

Minecraft Account Name: sabermark

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST/USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm 15 years old i live in New York after summer i will go to 10th grade and i'm a huge fan of minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:16 hours a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: december 2010

-What do you know about roleplaying?you take the role of a character and control its destiny.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it would be awsome to play as a dwarf

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on anarchy

role play servers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. dwarf , elf ,human, orc.

-How did you hear about us?:the player machineliam

-Did you vote?: yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: no vandalism and no stealing.

-What was your least favourite Law?:I like them all

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?sabermark

In-Character-:

-Character Name:Marcus Brewer

-What is your Race?: dwarf

-Biography: I was born in a mine near the dwarfern capital. Grew up in a regular family without any siblings . When i was 15 my father went to war agains the orcs but never came back . My mother died when i was 27 . Since the loss of my mother i was looking for a place to live and how to get by . Everyday i think of how i need a home.

-Character Age: 29

-Character Appearance: brown hair , light skin , blue eyes.

-Character Personality: I am a dwarf who makes friends easy, i don't go into many battles but i am friendly becouse of a hard life i was living .I am loyal too my friends.

-Your ambitions:to kill monsters and live in a city.

-Can your character read or write?:I can read and write.

-Can your character mine?:yes.

-Are you a capable builder? yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

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-Enjoy Farming?:yes.

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-Does your character have any special skills?:] mineing.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us...escaorsvg6.jpg/

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits

qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our

obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.