shadowstar10's application

[shadowstar10 0]

-Minecraft Account Name: Shadowstar10

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a normal guy who loves playing minecraft and the thrill of a challenge.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Between 20 and 30 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:about 7 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? Roleplaying I think is a fun thing to do me and my friends use to roleplay on our server.I love pretending to be another character,that does not always reflect my own personality.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it will be a fun and great community. I'm look forward to the adventure ahead.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play on my friends private servers but they got boring.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes I have read the rules and the lore.I have also studied the wiki.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans,Elves, Dwarves and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?:I saw the trailer on youtube.

-Did you vote?:Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:No griefing

-What was your least favourite Law?: None they all made sense

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Shadowstar10

In-Character: Valor Rondo

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Shadowstar10

-Biography: I was found in a lake with no parents a great warrior took me in. As I grew he taught great fighting skills and techniques.I became a great warrior and grew to love my father.He taught me how to fish and mine.I would help him run his sword shop everyday with was situated in whisper isles. I would polish and sharpen the blades everyday . By the age of 15 I was easily the best swordsman in the village, I was even better than my father. Until on one cold night I remember orcs attacking and kidnapping my father, I did everything to stop them but there where too many. Enraged I voweled that day to become one of the greatest warriors in all of Aegis and take down the Orcs.I trained every day and by the age of 20 I was ready to join the army and fight for the Humans.To one day get vengence on the cruelty of the orcs.

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: Strong always with my armour and tanned skin and a cape on my back

-Character Personality: Valor is kind and will help any one who needs it. He loves a challenge.He is tough though still longs the love of his father.

-Your ambitions: Valor hopes to one day become a high rank in the army and be able to lead a battle with the Orcs to claim vengeance.

-Can your character read or write?: I can only write and read very basic sentences I was never well taught.

-Can your character mine?: Yes my father taught me how to mine efficiently

-Are you a capable builder?: I am able to build quite well.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes I'm most comfortable with a sword in my hand

-Enjoy Farming?: No I hate farming.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Valor is able to run for great distances as he is extremely athletic.

-A screenshot of your skin:

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Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.