making my aplication

[sargentgrif 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: SargentGriff

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: pacific

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm good with computers my favorite game is minecraft. I'm good at math I'm good at science. i like RPing i like the lord of the craft server. i like xbox and i like camping.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 5 hours a day

-How long have you played minecraft?: about a year and a half

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i no that is kind of like acting you play a role that is not your real self and you have to live this role and be this character that's what roleplaying is.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a good RPing server and a good server that doesnt lag

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: if played on mine-rp.net server i left because it wasn't a very good RPing server. and I've played my own server i left my server because i got bored of it there wasn't any thing to do in the server so i turned it off.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: orcs dwarves and elves and humans. not counting the undead

-How did you hear about us?:a guy on YouTube called petri raids

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: sargentgrif

In-Character:

-Character Name: griffin

-What is your Race?: orc

-Biography: when i was born the future of my live looked pretty good i was strong and big.so when i got to age 11 my mom told my dad to teach me how to fight. and when i got to age 13 i was pretty good at fighting. so one day i was practicing fighting when my dad went out of the house and i saw him with his armor on and his sword and i ask what he was doing he said going to help fight the undead. so i said can i come and help and he said no. so after he left i went and got some of my dads minas and bot a sword. so i set out to follow my dad and when i got to where my dad was at he turned around and saw we and walked over and said what are you doing here. i said im coming to fight with you he said ok i think your ready let me buy you some armor. so when we got there we fot for a little and we won. and then they turned into dust and went back to the neither. so that day my dad said you should be a orc knight when you grow up

-Character Age: 15

-Character Appearance: a big strong orc that wonts to become a knight

-Character Personality: a very smart and happy orc that is good at making a good leader

-Your ambitions: to become a knight of aegis

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder?: yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: no

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us...0927215149.png/

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[Lirinya 4021]

Denied.

Need to add more to every section, no one word answers. Even if you just say 'Yes he/she can write' Rather than just 'yes'

Also, Spell check your application.