My LordoftheCraft Application, #2

[Sniper 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Orphanboy

-How old are you?: I am 14 years old.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in Queensland, Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I speak English and my grammar is quite good.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I go to a private school and am one of the best in Maths. My favourite food would most probably be carrots.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Because I have school I do not have much time during the week and on weekends I go out quite a lot, but I should still be able to put in a solid 5 hours a week. During my school holidays I will most probably play this server much more than 5 hours a week and would not be surprised if it was a minimum of 5 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have played minecraft for maybe 4 months now, I stopped playing for a while

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Okay so putting role-playing in my own words (keeping in mind that I have not read anything about it or anything during/before the last post) Role-Playing is where you assume the role of a character, and almost literally become the character. So any choices you make as that character must be made with only the characters knowledge (I have had experience with roleplaying during the very first RPG invented, or so I am told, Dungeons and Dragons board game, although it is the 5th Edition I played) so yeah, you assume the role of your character and play through it. You cannot make any decisions unless it is only with that characters knowledge and you cannot force any of your ideas or beliefs into a situation if your character does not agree with them. That is probably why it’s easier to create a role-playing character based in some way after yourself, keeping most of your own ideas and beliefs to make it much easier to role play.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be good because of the level system, which I have never used on minecraft before.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have only played 3 servers ever, for I could only recently play online with minecraft. Two of these servers belong to my friends. One of those two servers is strictly only for people my friend knows and the other of my friends server is open for all to play. I have not left them and will still play these servers whilst playing this server, although I will probably play this server more.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I do believe I have.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Elves, Dwarves and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?: I was browsing minecraft servers on the internet.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: My login name is C0KEC00KIE but the name I am told that will appear on forums and such is Sniper

In-Character:

-Character Name: Mysoef

-What is your Race?: Elven

-Biography: Okay so I, Mysoef, was once a lot younger and full of almost boyish pride, I wished to leave my home and his family and join the revered Wardens. I would try so hard to be worthy of their ranks that I would not help my father with any help he needed in his day to day life, instead I would train myself with the sword and bow for hours on end in preparation for when I finally come of age and am allowed to join the Wardens. So caught up with what I wanted I had ventured far into the woods one day and could not find my way back. Eventually I ran into a band of human woodcutters, who took me to live with them on the outskirts of The Great Kingdom of Oren. One day when I was old enough I took my stone sword and left for the Holy Princedom of Malinor to finally rejoin my family, even if it is only to say farewell and do what I had always dreamed of doing, joining the Wardens. Now here I stand, unsure of which way to walk, armed only with my stone sword and some provisions, standing here in the great city Laurelin.

-Character Age: Very very very young for an elf, Mysoef is only 25.

-Character Appearance: He has ocean-blue eyes and his ginger-blond hair. Normal dress for the Elven, except with some colour changes.

-Character Personality: Excitable and very loud most of the time, but still has the ability to walk unheard and unseen amongst the shadows.

-Your ambitions: To become one of the esteemed Wardens. Then he will retire to a smithy/mine and live out the days there.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, he was taught many years ago by his mother. He still practises the art.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, but very poorly and has no training.

-Are you a capable builder?: No Mysoef would most probably hire an architect to built his house or mansion.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he trains himself daily, but this is not expert training

-Enjoy Farming?: No, Mysoef has little patience for such things.

-Does your character have any special skills?: No, he pretty much has no significant skills, though he can do basic things.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/g/708/20111004184912.png/

-Other Information: This Application is exactly the same as the last except for the two things that GoldenGFX highlighted.

GoldenGFX, on 05 October 2011 - 09:06 AM, said:

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Go more in-depth in you biography.

2) Define role-playing in your own words.

I really have tried and any more advice, even if it’s the same, would be really helpful. Like man, I tried harder on this than I do on my school assignments. I would like it if GoldenGFX checked this out, but really any GM will do, just please remember to tell me whatever it is that may or may not be wrong with this. THANKS

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Lots of improvement here. Don't fail me.

[Sniper 0]

THANKYOU VERY MUCH