Eramar's app. (First one)

[Eramar 0]

-Minecraft Account Name:[eramar]

-How old are you?:[17]

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [GMT+2/Belgium]

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[i'm able to fluently express myself]

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[Very commited player with lots of experience. Loves when their is a background story, which normal SMP misses.]

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[4-6 hours per day]

-How long have you played minecraft?:[since beta came out]

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:[i've been playing alot of RP-servers lately, but they ar enot as dedicated as i would like. I really like to develop my own character and interact with others]

-What do you expect this server will be like?:[i hope that this server will be more dedicated then others, so that my RP-experience is maxed out]

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[servers like City-craft, blockface, citywars and other. I left them all because their weren't, as said above, really playing in character, which is what i expect to do on an rp server]

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[i have read both]

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, dwarf, elf and human

-How did you hear about us?:[google and minecraft.net]

-Did you vote?:[Yes I did]

-What was your favourite Law?:[That you have to RP into a kill, or to get out of one, so there will be less sudden ganks]

-What was your least favourite Law?:[That we must use server skins, cause i made my own skin, that fits my chars backstory]

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[Eramar]

In-Character:

-Character Name:[Eramar]

-What is your Race?:[Elf]

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:[Eramar]

-Biography:[At the age of 35, the young Eramar saw his village being overrun by unknown raiders. The raiders started killing of everybody they could find. The young boy saw his family being struck down in front of him, which filled him with a sudden jolt of rage. He drew his swords and started hacking away at the raiders with all the deadly grace he had learned. He managed to take down 13 fullgrown men before he was hit by an arrow. It looked like a fatal hit, so he was left to die, but as a final act, he managed to pull the arrow out his body and fire it back at the raider he presumed to be the leader, instantly killing him. After this, his memory is to blurry, he remembers being found by an elven band of assassins, who turned him into a deadly weapon. But after a while, Eramar realised that killing wasn't what he was made to do, so he fled the assassins that had become his family, and headed out to find his own path in life. He traveled alot, learning alot of different skills to survive and make money. But everytime he stayed somewhere to long, he became restless, and wanted to explore more. That's why he returned to Aegis, so he can explore her hidden secrets.]

-Character Age:[199]

-Character Appearance:[Few know his true apperance, as he is used to hiding it. The only thing that isn't covered are his eyes, cause he believes them to be the mirror to ones soul]

-Character Personality:[He is honest, straightforward but slightly damaged by the trauma. This caused him to be suspicious towards a lot of thing, until he knows more about them. And while he is a deadly force, he is kind of awkward around making friends, cause thats a new thing to him.]

-Your ambitions:[To find a new group, that he can protect and serve, as he failed to do at age 35. To find friends he can trust and to finally come at peace with the past. And to explore and provide new materials to the society.]

-Can your character read or write?:[His reading is very good, as he was educated by an elite order. So is his writing. Actually, he is one of the best forgers around]

-Can your character mine?: On his travels, my character has learned how to stay alive, by doing all sorts of jobs, including selling rare ores extracted from dangerous caves.

-Are you a capable builder? Eramar know how to build a stable and safe hideout that is almost invisible to the eye. He has also worked in the construction of some bigger projects as far as his restless mind allowed him to.

-Can you wield a sword?:[being trained by an elven swordmaster and an elite assassin, his sword is not a weapon anymore, it has become an extension of himself]

-Enjoy Farming?:[As he's allways on the move, Eramar has never experienced the feeling of farming, but he's eager to learn]

-Does your character have any special skills?:[Of course he possesses the critical assassin skills like stealth, lockpicking and knowledge of anatomy and herbs that can be either used to kill or to heal. Also as an elf, he knows how to be almost invisible by using the environnement. But he also has a great deal of charisma, with animals, and with the other races.]

-A screenshot of your skin:

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[Eramar 0]

So should i edit it or repost? :/