Auvreaeath 263 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: My minecraft name is Auvreaeath. I've been using this name for five years now. -How old are you?: I am currently the age of thirteen since October 1st of 2011. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: My timezone is Central Time Zone/ I'm currently in residence of the United States -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I believe I have a firm grip on proper English. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I was born in Germany, I'm currently in Seventh Grade, and taking Highschool classes. My Favorite Color is Blue, my favorite sport is Soccer, and I want to be an elf. I love to get on Minecraft and play on fun and neat servers in my freetime. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Around maybe 10hours+ weekly. -How long have you played minecraft?: I've been playing Minecraft sense the beginning of Beta. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I do not know much about roleplaying, My current knowledge of roleplaying is that role-playing refers to the changing of one's behavior to assume a role either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously to act out an adopted role. I believe an example of role-playing can be like a play? I do wish to learn more about role-playing on this server and from my fellow role-players. I had once played Runescape which was a bit of a role-playing game. I think I may have been role-playing for maybe around five years but not 100% role-playing. roles of characters and collaboratively create stories. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be a fun and enjoyable oppurtunity for me to find new friends and have a great time. I also hope it is a good chance for me to learn more about Roleplaying. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on two other servers I left them both because the owners had given up on themselves. I helped out one of them get around $100 in donations. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to the rules I believe they are all appropriate. I have also read and enjoyed the well written lore. -Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarves, Elves, Orcs -How did you hear about us?: I had seen the magnificent trailer and instinctedly read the rules then began filling out this form. -Did you vote?: Multiple times. -What was your favourite Law?: You must play in character as this is an RP server -What was your least favourite Law?: I had no least favourite Law I found them all reasonable and they all made perfectly normal sense to me. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Auvreaeath In-Character: -Character Name: Auvreaeath -What is your Race?: Elf -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Auvreaeath -Biography: I was born as a elf in a mysterious temple, the monks there brought me to a village deep inside of the forest of Aegis. There I had met a couple who had adopted me and raised me as there own, we were a happy family of elves, until one dreadful day. Undead raided through our eventful and cheerful village. They murdered everyone, my father died bravely trying to protect my mother and I. His very last words I had ever heard were "run"... My mother took a basket and ran as far and hard as she could but the Undead were gaining on her. She found a nearby river and put me in the basket and lowered me gently in the water.. That was the last I had ever seen of her. I wept for hours until suddenly I was lifted from the water by a strange figure wearing a green and grey cloak and carrying a fine Longbow. He brought me to a Castle somewhere far from my home and left me to the kings choice of action. The King took me in as a servant at the age of three but at the time didn't make me work. I was given food, water, and a home to stay in. When I was eight when I was given my first chores to do, I was a worker in the kings fields. I worked there for three years trying to do better then the rest of my fellow farmers. We enjoyed our work because it was a cheerful event to meet up with one another in the fields and talk about how our lives are doing. When I was Eleven I had met the Fine Arts Craft Master and she was excited to allow me to learn how to spell, read, and write correctly. I studied along side her for two years before graduating early. After that I was desperately trying to join the Battle-School, one day I was watching them when the Battle Master walked up behind me and asked me if I can handle a sword. I talked with him how I would like to learn and he allowed me to join the Battle-School for three years. During that period of time I trained hard, Studied for long hours, and became one of the top students. When the three years had ended the Battle Master cheerfully asked me if I would like to continue my training, I denied to offer only to find something else to do. I carried on with my life with a normal process helping out the farmers, giving money to the poor, and trying to do my best to stay healthy. One hot day the Ranger applied to our Castle had been watching me and he approached me asking if I would like to join the Rangers as his apprentice, I accepted the offer, I studied for two years with him he taught me how to use a bow with deadly accuracy, to blend in with the surrounding area undetected, and he was kind enough to teach me how to ride a horse. One day I was waiting for the Ranger to come back, he had told me he got me a present. I waited for an hour before he returned and with him was another horse. He gave me the horse and said "How do you like your new present? I think you should give it a name" I thanked him and thought of a name for my new horse, I ran out of ideas until I thought of Midnight for his dark black main. Months later the Ranger and I were given a mission to report a winning battle to the Royal Kingdom of Oren. We were half way there when we were ambushed... The Ranger and I were caught off guard and we instantly pulled out our bows, I was to late because Midnight had been shot in the heart by an arrow before I could save him. I screamed in horror and watched as the Ranger tried to back them off.. Sadly it was just like the faint memory of my Father's courage but I watched as the Ranger was shot... His last words for me were to run.. I ran as far away as possible to seek a new home. I stumbled across a group of Undead taking humans to their fortress.. I attacked the Undead successfully and freed the Humans. I brought them back to their home village and left them. I was wandering around the world of Aegis when I stumbled across the mysterious temple I had been born in. I stopped here curious to find out what I could of the beginning of my life and to seek an adventure I could not find anywhere else.. Hopefully this is where I will find it. -Character Age: 18 -Character Appearance: People have told me that Young elves like me should not be wandering the world. They mistake me for the age of 14 because I have not fully grown yet, I am around 5ft 7in's, I'm skinny, I have a sharp chin, and I am mostly called young. -Character Personality: youthful, adventureous, open minded, determined, generous, kind, friendly, caring, willing. -Your ambitions: To find adventure, then afterwords I wish to be known in the land of Aegis. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, I can do both with almost complete perfection. -Can your character mine?: Yes, I used to live among the Dwarves before they had learned I was an elf. -Are you a capable builder? It depends of the supplies I have, I can't build a thousand block city made of gold with 10 blocks of dirt. But if I'm given the correct supplies you can depend on something good. -Can you wield a sword?: Yes, I use Light Swords I find them to respond more quickly to the motion of my wrist. -Enjoy Farming?: I am not fond of it, If I must Farm then I will but if I can avoid it I surely am going to try. -Does your character have any special skills?:] I can climb greatly, move undedected, and shoot a arrow smoothly threw any given target. -A screenshot of your skin: -Other Information: I am in search of new adventure and hope this is where I will find it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadles 85 Share Posted October 17, 2011 A good try, however: You need to explain what you think role playing is better. Watch some interactions as a wandering soul, or do some research and update your answers. Your character biography is too short. Please make this more detailed. You have errors in your application. Please check spellings and grammar. Take your time, look at examples ((but don't copy them)) and try again. Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been Check out Petyr's excellent guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/ I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadles 85 Share Posted October 18, 2011 Welcome to Aegis. Please be patient while a GM updates this. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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