[Accepted]Application 4

[gazelutza 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

gazelutza

-How old are you?:

I have 24 years.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

+2 UTC,RO

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes,I have.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I recently finished college,and try to spend my remaining time free(until I find a job)with my girlfriend.I make technical drawing in my spare time for extra money.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

From 10 hours up.I do not know...depends on the surprises coming along.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I have been playing Minecraft for about 7 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

To roleplay is to assume the mantle of your character. Thinking in their mind.Rolaplaying is seeing the world a lot different than through your eyes.... it changes the whole way you play and it points out the flaws more than the good things about the world you "live" / "play" in. On another note....roleplaying is a way of playing Minecraft not through yourself but through your character... you make choices depending on what your caracter would do now you personally.

A roleplaying game is like a stage play, only that everyone can take part, and the plot is open. What happens next depends mainly on your own behaviour.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server being one in which you can evolve and alter the path your character choses depending on the situation... as for the comunity I expect it is being populated by sociable and advisable players.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on the server I oppened but as it appears you can't have everything with just 3-4 people so i wanted something more, something diffferent, something that could make me enjoy the game more.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have definitely read throught the rules and I completely understand them, and if I agreed or not...is your server your rules,if I did not like or agreed the ruls I do not write and fourth application.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

The four races are: The Humans,The Dwarves,The Elves,The Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

I stumbled through your sever via a couple of youtube videos from famous personalities recommending it.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

gazelutza

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Ka'el

-What is your Race?:

Elf

-Biography:

As a young girl, Ka'el was abandoned by his family and he wandered, alone, in the Elven woods.Since she was little she learned to fend for themselves and survive.

She tries to be nice to everybody! She is very focused on being polite and considerate. She has always been told that she is very empathetic and caring, able to sympathize extremely well with people who are upset. She tends to be quite shy, but very energetic once she feels comfortable around a person, though she keeps herself composed as to avoid becoming annoying. She has a very friendly and loving personality, and she is quite generous. She usually goes for the underdog, the one who needs a good friend to be there for them, an example of her empathy. She is known to be very comforting to others when they are upset. However, she does have a horrible self esteem problem and may need some comforting for herself. She is always so down on herself, and does stupid things, such as cutting, because of it. She a condition called Advoidant Personality Disorder, which is characterized by extreme shyness and anxiety in social situations- though she feels a strong desire for a close relationship-, trouble making and maintaining relationships with people, hyper-sensitivity to rejection/criticism, feelings of inadequacy, severely low self esteem, self loathing, highly self-conscious, and feeling inferior to others.

-Character Age:

777

-Character Appearance:

She wear a green shirt,and brown pants.she's hair is blond and the eyes blue.

-Character Personality:

She's polite and open to all,peacefull and hard working elf.Is very shy and always sit back and watch the events before you get involved.

-Your ambitions:

Ka'el aims to improve herself everyday, try to acquire as much knowledge as she can.

-Can your character read or write?:

She can not read or write because it had no where to learn.

-Can your character mine?:

Ka'el can handle a pick,can handle all tools in the wood.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes.Not having a home of her she wants to make a house exactly as seen in many places through which he walked

-Can you wield a sword?:

A bow or a sword, although she would love to use alchemy

-Enjoy Farming?:

Being quite patient,and the only place where one can be alone,he caught

this skill quickly.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

She has always had a sixth sense of being very in-tuned to other people's feelings and emotional status. She has also worked in a mine and has substantial upper body strength. She was very interested in bows, so she sought training to be an archer.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

Thank you for reading my application, and even if i don't get in this time i will continue to post another application every two days.

[Shoi 173]

I feel that is it lacking in lore, also you switch between he and she a bit to often. There is a few minor errors in grammar which are okay, but try to keep capitalization and punctuation, this amazingly helps portray how your character sees herself.

I highly recommend checking out:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php/Main_Page

Mention how far away from Laurelin for example.

If you have any other questions feel free to message me or hit me up on teamspeak.

[gazelutza 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

gazelutza

-How old are you?:

I have 24 years.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

+2 UTC,RO

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes,I try to have.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I recently finished college,and try to spend my remaining time free(until I find a job)with my girlfriend.I make technical drawing in my spare time for extra money.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

From 10 hours up.I do not know...depends on the surprises coming along.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

I have been playing Minecraft for about 7 months.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

To roleplay is to assume the mantle of your character. Thinking in their mind.Rolaplaying is seeing the world a lot different than through your eyes.... it changes the whole way you play and it points out the flaws more than the good things about the world you "live" / "play" in. On another note....roleplaying is a way of playing Minecraft not through yourself but through your character... you make choices depending on what your caracter would do now you personally.

A roleplaying game is like a stage play, only that everyone can take part, and the plot is open. What happens next depends mainly on your own behaviour.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server being one in which you can evolve and alter the path your character choses depending on the situation... as for the comunity I expect it is being populated by sociable and advisable players.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on the server I oppened but as it appears you can't have everything with just 3-4 people so i wanted something more, something diffferent, something that could make me enjoy the game more.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have definitely read throught the rules and I completely understand them, and if I agreed or not...is your server your rules,if I did not like or agreed the ruls I do not write and fourth application.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

The four races are: The Humans,The Dwarves,The Elves,The Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

I stumbled through your sever via a couple of youtube videos from famous personalities recommending it.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

gazelutza

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Ka'el

-What is your Race?:

Elf

-Biography:

Ka’el had her name chosen by her mother immediately after being born. Her mother was Lúthien Alcarin and her father Golradir Ancalimë. Her father was a member in The Black Brotherhood and after a while he ran away due to the fact that he didn’t like what he managed to become. He left Malinor and alienated from any inhabited area establishing his settlement in a very thick forest.

Hunting, he met Luthien. She was lying injured and senseless next to a lake. He took her and looked after her and since then they have been together. Luthien doesn’t remember anything, probably because of the hit, and lost her previous memories.

Ka’el was taught since early childhood by her father how to survive in the forest, how to find food and how to sleep in the forest during the night. She learnt how to handle the arch and the knife. She was haunting and bringing the meat and the skin home. Luthien taught her the agricultural technique. She taught her how to cook a little bit as not to be forced to eat unprepared meal in her backpaking

During her spare time, she walks in the surroundings of her home and without realizing she bears away. She has been dreaming for a long time of the inhabited places from his father’s tales or from the tales counted to her every evening before going to bed. Once with the age of 140 she wants to head for Malinor. She wants to make a name for herself which will be remembered by many people. This is her dream. Now she is 139 and feels how slowly time flies for her.

-Character Age:

139

-Character Appearance:

She wear a green shirt,and brown pants.she's hair is blond and the eyes blue.

-Character Personality:

She's polite and open to all,peacefull and hard working elf.Is very shy and always sit back and watch the events before you get involved.

-Your ambitions:

Ka'el aims to improve herself everyday, try to acquire as much knowledge as she can.

-Can your character read or write?:

She can not read or write because it had no where to learn.

-Can your character mine?:

Ka'el can handle a pick,can handle all tools in the wood.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes.Not having a home of her she wants to make a house exactly as in her father's stories.

-Can you wield a sword?:

A bow or a sword, although she would love to use knife

-Enjoy Farming?:

Being quite patient,and the only place where one can be alone,he caught

this skill quickly.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

She has always had a sixth sense of being very in-tuned to other people's feelings and emotional status. She has also worked in a mine and has substantial upper body strength. She was very interested in bows, so she sought training to be an archer.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

Thank you for reading my application, and even if i don't get in this time i will continue to post another application every two days.

[Shoi 173]

Very good. ACCEPTED

But i recommend changing the dark brotherhood to the black and the the road called King's Road.

[gazelutza 0]

Very good. ACCEPTED

But i recommend changing the dark brotherhood to the black and the the road called King's Road.

I changed to black but I do not understand the side with "King's Road"