Undeadflayme's Application

[Undeadflayme 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Undeadflayme

-How old are you?: 13 years of age

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific time zone/USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in the USA all my life.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like RP servers on minecraft as well as freebuild servers. I get good grades in school and play sports as well as video games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At least an hour each day

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since November 2010

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Well most RPs ive played have some sort of quest system. ive been doing RPs for about 5 months now. I like RPs that have some sort of base storyline in the experience.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I am expecting a lot from this server because ive seen lots of trailers and have heard many recommendations from friends.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't really remember the names of the servers, i left them because they were not the right size and/or did not have enough plugins to make it into a real RP experience.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to both the rules and the lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orks

-How did you hear about us?: A video trailer by Reckreations(i think that's how you spell it) on youtube

-Did you vote?: Yes i have voted for Lord of the Craft.

-What was your favourite Law?: I don't really have a favorite law.

-What was your least favourite Law?: None really

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Undeadflayme

In-Character:

-Character Name: Sharooke

-What is your Race?: Orks but later when im more trusted i would like to become an Undead.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Undeadflayme

-Biography: Born into a very poor family and usually was hungry for food. He began to walk at an early age and when he could he caught any pig he could find and ate it raw. At an early age he was very smart and always ahead of his friends. His family was killed by an army of dwarves and he seeked revenge ever since. He gained knowledge every day and got stronger with every breath. Now was the time to avenge his family and he wasn't going to let the chance go by.

-Character Age: 27

-Character Appearance: Looks and smells like most orks but always with a devious look in his eyes.

-Character Personality: Power hungry and very smart

-Your ambitions: To be the strongest ork in the army

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he is smarter than most orks

-Can your character mine?: Yes at top speed

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes top of his class

-Enjoy Farming?: No

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes he can use almost any weapon against almost any foe and brutally slaughter them in a matter of seconds with no mercy.]

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/view/126051

-Other Information:

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

It is not neat / is ALL BOLD.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/