My application

[Shadow Ranger 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Spasgas

-How old are you?: 14 years old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Arizona/Phoenix

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a average person, and do not like in mature people. I am serious when told. I will try to help in any I can.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: In total of the entire week about 4-5 hours depending on school.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since Alpha

-What do you know about role playing? How long have you been doing it? What kind? I played World of Warcraft from vanilla to Cataclysm so I know a lot. I did a lot of raiding and massive amounts of playing with other people and talking in vent. So around 7 years total. It is an MMORPG.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect a fun new game. I will not get bored of minecraft in the next 5 years.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on ShadowRaze.Net and I quit because of all the grieving and the constant crashing of the server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore? : I have read the rules. I understood you guys like control over your players. I like this, good control leads to great things.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orcs, Elves, Humans, Dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?:One of my Friends told me about this server and said I might like it. I checked out your website and I loved the concept of Lord of the Craft.

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No griefing. I like this rule because there will not be

a bunch of in mature kids destroying things I built.

-What was your least favourite Law?: I do not have a least favourite law. I like all of the laws.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Ranger

In-Character:

-Character Name: Vlad IceBound

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Ranger

-Biography: Vlad never knew is parents. He was told in the orphanage his parents died by a group of thief's while thy were on a ride through the forest. Vlad was always interested in the art of war. Vlad found at the age of 10, he was extremely good with a bow. He practiced in the forest of Aegis. At the age of 15 he beat a well known marksmen in a duel to the death. Vlad has always wanted to join the military since he was of age. He is well trained in the art of stealth and marksmen ship. Vlad is a average swordsmen and is brave.

-Character Age: 24

-Character Appearance: Average sized, medium build.

-Character Personality: Serious, Grim, Mature, Brave

-Your ambitions: Vlad wants to become a well skilled marksmen. So pretty much he wants to join the military. Vlad will do as told, and will not question his orders.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, he was taught by a old man who visited his orphanage to teach the children how to read old scrolls and book.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, Vlad has strong arms for practicing with is bow.

-Are you a capable builder? Vlad is not a very good builder.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, Vlad is a average Swordsmen

-Enjoy Farming?: Vlad does enjoy farming, he is patient and likes silence

-Does your character have any special skills?: Vlad is very good with a bow and good at sneaking behind enemy lines.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: None

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

Did you play WoW on an RP server. Your description of what role play is makes me think you don't know / understand what it is. Please explain what role playing is...

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

It is not neat / is ALL BOLD.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Shadow Ranger 1]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

Did you play WoW on an RP server. Your description of what role play is makes me think you don't know / understand what it is. Please explain what role playing is...

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

It is not neat / is ALL BOLD.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Thank you for your time and effort. I will try again. I will follow what you said, try to make it better, and succead.