Jaez' Application.

[Jaez 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Jaewonz

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PST

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a 13 year old student at a middle school in California, i will be going into high school next year. I am a PC gamer that plays with a group of friends on assorted games like League of Legends, and Global Agenda. We occasionally move around from games to try new things out.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 1-3 Hours, I might be playing with my friends so i don't know how long :).

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Beta 1.3.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is the act of acting as a character not being yourself you are immersing yourself into another being and performing the actions you'd think of the being.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A perfect experience for me as a Roleplayer in many games such as Warcraft 3 and Starcraft 1 and 2

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on the Plague which was a mild RP survival game, the management kicked me out for having god mode being an admin in the past and forgetting to turn it off or forgetting the command for it.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Elf, Dwarf, Orc

-How did you hear about us?: Youtube Trailer

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Jaez

In-Character:

-Character Name: Teasendlues

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: I come from my native homeland of the elves, i am a skilled person of the bow and arrow, i am wandering around aimlessly looking for a person i can be with, a person who can teach me how the ways of life goes, i am a orphan. I strive to be a soldier or a guardian as i lust for war and battle. His life is a sad tale, the day he was born his parents was rushed into battle and he was left to himself in a cold home, days later his father returned with blood stains, he looked pale and weak he fell to his knees and perished, the sight is etched into my brain. As he grew older he was usually found with no food or money, he usually wanders around looking for a job so he can feed himself.

-Character Age: 18

-Character Appearance: Green eyes, blonde hair, with a green and brown cloak and suit with a hood.

-Character Personality: A elf who works hard to get what he wants, and tries to find a purpose in himself, he is a master of the bow.

-Your ambitions: To be able to be use of the community and might one day join the council.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?: Possibly, adept in redstone

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes

-Enjoy Farming?: So-so

-Does your character have any special skills?: Able to draw two arrows to his bow.

-A screenshot of your skin: Well its a link http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=6173

-Other Information: Nope :3

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/