Skrel's application

[Skrel 3]

Out-Of-Character:

Skrel

-Minecraft Account Name:

Skrel

-How old are you?:

17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central time, Vermont, United states, 05477

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i do. My grammar could use a bit of a touch up.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm often on my computer surfing the internet. Lots of school work if i'm not on my computer

I'm doing homework.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Seven days a week. I'm usually on during the afternoons.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Three or four weeks.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I've been roleplaying for a few years now i stated on a game called whirled. I've also played world of warcraft for about a year. Roleplaying is about going into a new world and being a new person, having a change in dialogue. You become the character.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to enjoyable. I have already explored it as a wondering soul it seems very spacious. The roleplayers seem to be very serious about what they're doing which is always an upside.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've play on play.minecraftrpgserver.com i didn't stop, but don't go on it very much anymore

because it got annoying other players were irritating and obnoxious.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I've read the laws and agreed to them. I loved the lore it had a great story line.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Elves, Humans, Dwarves, and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?:

My brother was looking for a server and went on this server and said it was really fun, so i took his word.

-Did you vote?:

Yes i did.

-What was your favourite Law?:

No racial discrimination.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

After death 30 minutes of your memory is removed, and you cannot go back to your previous spot for 30 minutes.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Skrel

In-Character:

Agile, kind in heart. Kills only if necessary.

-Character Name:

Organdius

-What is your Race?:

Elven.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Skrel

-Biography:

When Organdius was young his parents died in a raid. Ever since that day he had been raised by peasants that lived on the outskirts of The Holy Princedom of Malinor. Every night after sunset Organdius would set out into the wood with nothing but a bow and a sword. He would practice hours sometimes even until the sun arose. This was courageous, yet very foolish, because the peasants forbid Organdius to go out into the wilderness after sunset. After a year of doing so he was caught and from that moment on every night was locked in his room until he moved away into his own home. As this young boy aged he became stronger, faster, and wiser. He wanted to be in battle so badly, but after his first raid he realized that war wasn't the answer. Watching bloody corpses falling to the ground and shrieks of pain. After that day Organdius made a promise to himself, he would never fight unless needed.

Years after Organdius had moved away from the peasants he made money by collecting wood. He had moved into a small house in Malinor built into a tree. This was a praise from the gods. Life was good again. It was almost worth living. But after one long day of collecting wood he saw a zombie, no big deal because it didn't see him. He drew his bow and shot a killing blow. He had broken his promise. When he arrived home from logging that night he decided he was going to join an archery unit to patrol Malinors walls at night. After doing so he encountered many pointless attempts at raiding Malinor. As time passed his archery skills improved and decided that he could offer more than patrolling the walls. He decided to help people in need and go out on quests, and patrol the wall. This is how his family name was heard.

-Character Age:

32

-Character Appearance:

Wears green clothing with a brownish vest. He's a Wood Elf, and has black hair, and tan skin.

Even though his skin is green he's an elf.

-Character Personality:

Kind, agile, courageous, foolish at times

Wanting to help people in need, gentle, reckless.

-Your ambitions:

He is on the path of light. Wanting to make his family name heard to everyone,

wanting to help people in need and the poor.

-Can your character read or write?:

My character is illiterate because he was raised by peasants, and peasants didn't know how to read.

-Can your character mine?:

No he cannot, he doesn't have the strength to pound the ax into the stone all day.

-Are you a capable builder?

He use to build small huts for the poor. So he is an experienced builder.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes he can. He taught himself during the afternoons when he was young.

-Enjoy Farming?:

He can farm, wheat, and pumpkins, but doesn't enjoy it.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

My character usually wields a bow.

Very quick on his feet.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetmin...kin/skrels-elf/

-Other Information:

Nothing really, he isn't very strong but very accurate and quick.

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Please check your grammar and punctuation.

Some of your answers contradict themselves.

For example: "Wears green clothing with a brownish vest. He's a Wood Elf, and has black hair, and tan skin.

Even though his skin is green he's an elf." Is his skin tan or green?!

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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