Server Application

[Alexmosca 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: alexmosca

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -7 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I would like to think I do. But we are only human and will occasionally make a mistake.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: During the day I got to a jr. High school. I also play on a semi-pro Soccer team. When i have free time i play minecraft or xbox i like all Rp or RPG games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 10-15 hours a week and at the least 5 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 5 to 6 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I understand that it is taking on a role of a character, this character being your Minecraft character and playing out your adventure through the eyes this person. Not by what you know as the controller of the character. What you see through the eyes and hear through the game is what your character knows.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A unique environment of players having fun and interacting in a fictional world. Making an adventure, a journey unlike any other Minecraft has seen.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None. This will be my first.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. Without rules there would be complete chaos.

-Name the 4 races on this server: That would be Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?:I was on Minecraft servers and saw your server name and it seemed cool so I read on and it sounded amazing. I joined the server and i love it so far.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Display name: Alexmosca Account name: Alexmosca

In-Character:

-Character Name: Kenji

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: An Small Human, Kenji was born in a small house and named after his father. He was raised in a community of what seemed like a Huge family To him. No one outside of his immediate family ever came in contact with him. He was born a warrior. From the time of birth on he was training to be the best. Always beating his brother Renzi. He wanted to leave and move on. He had heard of some trainers in a small town just west of his settlement. His family didn't want him to leave but it was his destiny. The family prepared a feast to show Kenji that they had their support. With all the encouragement from his family he left his settlement to be the best In the land of Aegis.

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance: Wearing a brown shirt that his sister gifted him before he left. Some Pants made from the strongest fabric.

-Character Personality: Loud but nice. Easily trusted and honest.

-Your ambitions: To be the best warrior in all of the land. One day to beat his Best friend Jaki.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read but not right.

-Can your character mine?: with ease.

-Are you a capable builder?: When he was on the settlement he was the master carpenter.

-Can you wield a sword?: He is a warrior isn't he.

-Enjoy Farming?: No, but he will farm if need be.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He has a good skill of fabrication and can make a sword with bare essentials.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: If i get accepted it would be an honor but if i don't i would like to say you guys run an amazing server.

[M0n1e 1]

~ADVICE~

I read your application and it seems alright but there are a few errors:

You seem to have extensive knowledge about role playing which is great, and your out-of-character information is actually quite good.

I like the fact your very honest and answer your questions clearly, but your biography seems really boring, and doesn’t seem interesting enough to accepted. Please put more information into your bio.

Could you also please check your spelling, grammar and punctuation again. I Don’t like the fact your referring to your character as “A worrior” it seems very cliché.

Put more effort into it and take your time. You need your screenshot, as it is required.

Please take this as creative critism.

I hope you keep in mind this advise and re-write this.

Otherwise, keep trying as your application is good.

[_edplayer 15]

denied : bio too short