minecraft8101219

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Out-Of-Character:peyton

-Minecraft Account Name:minecraft8101219

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: us western time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:medium sized black hair.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekday 3:00 to 9:00

-How long have you played minecraft?:a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:many many games of rpg

-What do you expect this server will be like?:server full of wonders

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i haven't left any

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes, yes

-Name the 4 races on this server.dwarf human elf orc

-How did you hear about us?:mcforums

-Did you vote?:yes

-What was your favourite Law?:no breaking landscape

-What was your least favourite Law?:none

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?123

In-Character:Jack ____

-Character Name:Jack_____

-What is your Race?: human with a little elf because my mum was a elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:123

-Biography: Jack _____ was always getting in trouble for breaking thing with his powers.

-Character Age:14

-Character Appearance:medium height black hair ,slim

-Character Personality:He is always curios of the world

-Your ambitions:to become a master builder

-Can your character read or write?:he can read and write good

-Can your character mine?:he had expierence since his dad was a dwarf

-Are you a capable builder?yes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes

-Enjoy Farming?:kinda

-Does your character have any special skills?:]he can make thing go on and of when hes excited

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/api.php?mode=preview&type=both&id=223268

-Other Information:..

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short. It lacks effort and a character can not be based on one sentence... Write a back story that details some of his life before he came to Aegis. Also give him a surname _____ is not a valid name, nor even a word. If you don't want people to know his surname, don't tell them in character.

Overall this lacks effort.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/