kyleravioli's Application

[kyleravioli 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: kyleravioli

-How old are you?: 18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time; USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a very respectful and kind person. I love Role-playing and fantasy. I am also very committed and good at following instruction.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 7-14 hours a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: About a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I roleplayed as the leader of a nation in a game called NationStates however I have not had a hand at fantasy roleplaying.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be full of fantasy-like structures with committed and mature members.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I usually only play on my own server with close friends.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read and agree with the rules and lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elves, Humans, dwarves, and orcs

-How did you hear about us?: Though the LB Photo Realism Texture Pack

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: You must keep in character

-What was your least favourite Law?: If I had to choose it would be "You must have a forum account"

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? kyleravioli

In-Character:

-Character Name: Alleo

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: kyleravioli

-Biography: Alleo was born in small Elven town. His father died defending the town after a rogue group pillaged the town. Luckily Alleo's mother survived the attack and Alleo became the man of the house. Alleo always had an ambition for architecture being a very creative and intelligent elf. Alleo is now a prominent and influential member of his town. But Alleo wants to explore other lands. He has heard the tales from travelers and merchants of wondrous places and Alleo is ready to move on from small town to bigger and better things.

-Character Age: 27

-Character Appearance: Tall with a medium build. Has blue eyes and brown hair.

-Character Personality: Curious. Very benevolent and always has good intentions.

-Your ambitions: To explore and gain knowledge of other lands

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: No

-Are you a capable builder? Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Alleo dislikes fighting but will if he has to. His fighting talents are not very strong

-Enjoy Farming?: No

-Does your character have any special skills?:] Alleo is an excellent architect and very intelligent

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/userskins/man_in_a_hood_by_jackie1st.png

-Other Information: None

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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