Hoss665's Application.

[Hoss 16]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Hoss665

-How old are you?:

13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Time, USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I was grown up in the USA

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a 13 year old boy. I enjoy snowmobiling in the Winter time. During Summer, I enjoy taking my ATV out with my dad and riding it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

25 Hours a week.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

About a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

Roleplaying is when you put yourself into the role of your Minecraft Character. You would act realistic and not be an idiot, unless your character is kinda an idiot...

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to be a fun server filled with amazing RP'ers, who give people fair rights on the server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on Pitforge.com, and I still go on Pitforge and visit them.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I read and understand the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Dwarf, Elf, Human, and Orc.

-How did you hear about us?:

My friend Skippy369 told me about this server and how I should apply.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Hoss665

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In-Character:

-Character Name:

Hoss

-What is your Race?:

Dwarf

-Biography:

Hoss was born to a poor, but friendly family. They lived in the outskirts of Kal'Urguan during Simmpa's rule. Hoss's father was a Miner for Simmpa, but since the mines were dried up from all the ore he got payed little to nothing. His mother, was a simple farmer. Every week when she was ready to harvest wheat and sugar cane, and sell it to the local market. The family didn't get much out of this, but it kept them alive.

One day, the city seemed life less. You couldn't hear the laughter of the drunks in the bar. Nor could you hear the hammering of the Grand Master Smith at work. All was silent. Then llightning struck. The Undead were attacking! Every dwarf in Kal'Urguan armored up and ran to the front gate. Undead managed to get through and kill tons of dwarfs. Some of those dwarfs was Hoss's mother and father. Hoss was depressed and left Kal'Urguan to think about everything that was happening. Almost 10 years later, Hoss returns looking to start a new life, under the rule of King Gotrek.

-Character Age:

183

-Character Appearance:

Hoss is a bald dwarf, exept for his beard. His shirt is chain mail, and he wears brown pants.

-Character Personality:

Hoss is a battle ready dwarf, who will stick up for a friend even if it means death.

-Your ambitions:

Hoss seeks to start a new life under the rule of Gotrek.

-Can your character read or write?:

Hoss can read fairly easy and can write a bit.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes, Hoss's father taught Hoss to mine in his spare time.

-Are you a capable builder?:

No, Hoss wasn't born to build.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes, the Mines have made Hoss strong and able to wield any type of sword.

-Enjoy Farming?:

He'll do it, but doesn't enjoy it.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

No, not really.

-A screenshot of your skin:

I attached it

-Other Information: I thank you for taking the time out of your day to read my app, and I hope you consider accepting me. Thanks!

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/