I really need tips on how to make a better server application!

[Kyepie123 0]

Here is my server application I need tips on what will make it better Pm me tips, or comment on this topic any tips! All Tips are welcome!

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Kyepie123

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Eastern time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:great grip on the language okay grammar but sometimes i will use southern slang such as "yall" or "aint" :D

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Just a teen trying to figure out the world and what me purpose is.I enjoy RPGS and multiplayer gaming I hope to have a great experience on this server :D.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Time all depends on what im doing that week if i had to predict i would estimate APX 8-10 hours throughout weekdays and on weekends almost all day so like 10-20 hours on weekends

-How long have you played minecraft?:5 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: my roleplaying probably started at age 14 or 15 when i played the well known game as "RuneScape" I know the basics for RP but I will gain more knowladge on RP as the future comes. I just know Role Playing is where you make your own imaginary character by deciding his life his background and everything and you play the role of this person in an imaginary world. (Very rough I know) But i love role playing.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I plan to have a great time on this server except I think chat will be annoying every now and then with so many people on this server. It looks extremley fun and a great adventure. It also looks very well orginized and I cant wait.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on a kingdome like server almost similar to this one but not as awesome it got boring really fast and i played on another server with my friend called "iron minecarts" i believe was the name of it, and i have wanted to join this server for a long time.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes i agree to the rules I understand them and I understand the Lore I have not memorized them but I will try to glue them in my brain.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Orcs, Elves, Dwarves, Humans

-How did you hear about us?: Internet

-Did you vote?:yes

-What was your favourite Law?: Im so happy that griefing is not allowed. The "no griefing" law is my favorite

-What was your least favourite Law?: I think all the laws are needed i like all of the laws.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Kyepie123

In-Character: Hezikia or Kye my username is (Kyepie123)

-Character Name: Hezikia (Kye)

-What is your Race?:Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

-Biography: I was born in a small Valley with my mother father and sister. At age 70 (dwarven years) my village was attacked by a group of Orcs. The captain of the Orc scouts murdered my family and burnt down my village. I imeddiatly ran to my fathers barn got the family horse and as the screams and terror of the dying village was herd behind me I just kept riding on. The day still haunts me to this day. For weeks I wandered the countryside trying to survive, I learned to hunt, fish, and fight. Ocassionaly i would come by a village and get the supplies I needed but I never settled down. I was a nomad. As I travled village to village I learned how to fight and my social skills became greater. Years passed and as I travled around I passed by a miners town where I was offered a job as a coal miner. I eventaully got paid and decided to settle down. Eventually when i get the resources I need I will settle down build a house, farm, mine, and become more social. I was tired of living as a hermit. Im now 140 years old and Im a young dwarf trying to become succesful.

-Character Age:140 yrs

-Character Appearance: 3 feet, Redish Brown hair, Black eyes

-Character Personality:Rebel, young, tough smart, sly, stubborn, drunken, funny, insane dwarf.

-Your ambitions: Kill any Orc that crosses paths with me, farming and earning some good money settling down, and perhaps either fighting in battle one day.

-Can your character read or write?: Read yes, Writing basics are covered but not your finest writer.

-Can your character mine?:Yes Very well

-Are you a capable builder?: If needed I will build what is asked for

-Can you wield a sword?: Weild a sword only for self defense

-Enjoy Farming?:Very much, farming is my life

-Does your character have any special skills?:Very funny and Im quite a good builder

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/gimli---lord-of-the-rings/

-Other Information:None

[DoubleDeetz (Fomsil) 237]

Here;

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/25902-advanced-application-support/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

But this is in the Wrong section.