Vaunce's application

[Bursho 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Vaunce

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern standrad USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm sarcastic but i can also be kind to people who show me kindness back. If things happen that directly conflict with my actions in real life then i usually like an explanation. I'm here to make my second character because my first has. . . oldened. I've been absent for a couple of months (five +) and joining back into the game with an old character would, and will, be a hardship, instead I am starting anew.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I could play saturdays and sundays, and many evenings.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I've played Minecraft since the Seeecret friday update.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Yes, I know what roleplaying is. Roleplaying is the act of developing a character through a story line and living out that characters life as much as you would your own.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be kind and not grreifer full.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I've played on many servers and i've left them all, besides Euphos of Eurylos, because they've died off.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, I most certainly have.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Dwarf

Human

Elf

Orc

-How did you hear about us?:I heard you through MC forums.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Bursho

In-Character:

-Character Name: Vriurk Bone-dragger

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Biography: Vriuck was the son of a small war cheif, named Burran. Respected in the North lands as a smart elder Burran ended up with the smallest, but very powerful, tribe, which consisted of mainly warriors and shamans, for the light of the Orc god was the light to be bathed in. Following his fathers footsteps Vriuck grew up to be a grand war cheiftan, and ended up going into the great Saber wars!

During the Saber wars Vriuck became a man and expended much of his sanity. As he slashed through the crimson blood of other orcs, and even gnolls and hobs, his most difficult time was when he was captured. During his imprisonment he suffered unthinkable punishment and had his left eyes cleaned through with a red hot crescent knife, often known to bring bad luck to those slashed by it. The toughest time in the imprisonment though was during the revolt in the concentration camp.

The night the orc prisoners announced it time to revolt Vriuck had been dragged up into it by others. He revolted with his comrades and slaid many guards. As they neared the gates, their last obstacle to freedom, it closed, impaling those infront of the pack. As the revolt stopped many orc guards clad in heavy red armor surrounded them the shreik of orcs being peirced by spears swarmed the air as it blotched out all other sounds, except for Vriuck's heart beat witch bashed within his skull, like a crazed imp in a cage.

Those who were not speared were tortured an even sentenced to kill their allies, which Vriuck, in time, had to do. As the camp was liberated by other orcs those that were imprisoned, including Vriuck, were freed, but they never left as sane as which they entered. Vriuck now roams the land trying to find the peice of his mind he lost in that camp, often looking within others or the thrill of the fight to blotch out, and often times finding alchohol does the same.

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance:

-Character Personality: Vriurk is a cold calculating man, well, orc. He is a proud supporter of his nationality and hates to be called man, or even human. He has an eye for combat and even more of an eye for the fine curve of a bow. He enjoys his time tipping drinks at a local brewery and pinching coin at gambling, often getting himself into trouble. Vriurk, although a hardened veteran, can develop a sweet spot for others, mostly human, even though he'd never admit it. To gain his trust is to hold a very fragile, but powerful, object for he will fight to death and grave for his friends and loved ones.

-Your ambitions: To become the once great general Vriurk once was, and to finally feel he has a home, once more.

-Can your character read or write?: He can write some english and can read just about the same.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, only if he has enough light to show shiny stuff though.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, if building tents and military structures is building.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes, he's a hardened veteran of the Saber wars.

-Enjoy Farming?: No, that's to be left to those who can fight.

-Does your character have any special skills?:-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: Vriuck has the last name Bone-dragger because that was his lcan name, even though they are now dead.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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