Coopra's Re-Application

[Coopra 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Coopra

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Time / United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I have a good grip on English grammar.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a teenager in high school and life is quite and adventure. I play Mine Craft or some other games to pass the time along when I'm done all the homework and my friend's aren't around.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could play about 20-24 hours a week.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I've played Mine Craft about a year or more.

-What do you know about role-playing?: Role-playing is the dialogue and the actions of a character in a given game. Usually a server is a "role-playing" server which means the players on it do not talk about their own life, and instead talk about their characters in game life, as if you were acting in a play.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server to be very unique, and have a expansive player base.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a server called "Proxis" and I played it because of it's heroes plugin and the diversity of classes the owner made with it. I stopped because as time progressed classes became over powered and it wasn't as fun anymore.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:I have read all the rules and understand and agree with them.

-Name the 4 races on this server:The four main races are Human, Dwarf, Elf, and Orc, not counting the sub-races.

-How did you hear about us?:From my friend MilkyShakes who found it on Minestatus.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Coopra

In-Character:

-Character Name: Inanis (meaing void in Irish)

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: As a young dwarf Inanis seemed to excell in his intellctual studies, even for a dwarf. He felt a sense of peace and power as he learned new things. One day when he was just starting to shave his dwarven beard (he doesn't like to keep it long) he walked back to the Cloud Temple, from which he was born. As he admired it while wielding a book of his notes a man snatched it from his bare hands and sprinted into the forest. Instanly, Inanis follow after the theif. As he ran after the human, the man disappeared behind a branch and when he looked through the leaves all that was left was a big gaping hole. He cautiously walked up to it and tried to look down into the darkness it grasped. He heard the man approach him form behind, but before he could move he was shoved into the narrow trench. As he fell it seemed he was falling for an eternity. Then black. He had entered the myth of the void. He saw a purple light reach out to him in the shape of a hand. He took the hand and as he did his body started to glow a deep purple. He opened his eyes, welcomed by a monk. As he arose from the bed he realized he was in the Cloud Temple. The only explanation was that he was reborn, but oddly enough he still had his intellect. Later on when he was about 180 or so he went out to study cows and sheep. He reached out to one, almost as the hand did in his dark free-fall, and the sheep fell to the ground and its wool fell off, and turned a deep purple. From then on he has continued to master his magic the void has gifted him with. However, he also carries a burden. His eyes have grown pale and his his anger causes outbursts. With a dwarven temper he has spent his life in meditation, trying to control the outbursts and has excluded himself from all, but who are not afraid of the harm he can do.

-Character Age: 200, with still barely visible of a beard.

-Character Appearance: He bears a robe he had before the void. Half had faded to the deep purple and half has not. Underneath the robe is a black tunic and leggings that used to be a bright white. His pupils are almost as pale as the whites of his eyes.

-Character Personality: He is not very social, but only to keep others from being harmed. He is very social with those who continue to interact with him despite the threat he possess. He is also quiet, and may seem clueless, despite the fact he usually knows exactly what you mean.

-Your ambitions: He wishes to learn to control his powers and make a legion of others like himself, so he may help them control their powers too.

-Can your character read or write?: His intellect makes him excellent at both.

-Can your character mine?: Although every dwarf can mine, he has not has much practice.

-Are you a capable builder?: He can use his wits ti build magificent things if he wishes.

-Can you wield a sword?: He doesn't have any practice and his magic is his weapon.

-Enjoy Farming?: He knows how to but doesn't like to.

-Does your character have any special skills?: His special skill is his magical abilities.

-A screenshot of your skin: I put it as a attachment.

-Other Information: Inanis was not his name before the void incident. He was renamed Inanis in the Cloud Temple and for some reason, his old names seems to be the one thing he can not remember. Also, I was white-listed, however, I wanted to create a new personality and bio for my character and the forum mod williewonka01 told me I could.

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-Bumping your application.

-You're an orphan.

-You didn't double space.

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Your character is 'evil' prior to an accepted villain application, your server application comes before being able to create an evil

character.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-applicati