Application

[Mystogan 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Henni96

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I learnd english at school. So please don´t be so strict. ;D

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I go to school everyday and after it i play minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 10 hours a week and at the least 7 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 1 year.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: To Roleplay is to be someone your not whether your rich or poor to act in situations such as war and adventures! When I am in the server my complete mind will be focused on roleplaying.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: It will be a lott of fun. I can´t wait to play!!!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: None. This will be my first.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: Your commercial on YouTube.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Mystogan

In-Character:

-Character Name: Mystogan

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: In a cold night a child was born. His parents named him Draken. Draken´s parents were poor farmers people. Their farm was near the Kingdome of Oren. But when King Sheffield became an Undead they were scared, so they ask a wandering wizzard how he can help then. The wizzard gave them a talisan. Draken knew that the wizzard was lying. It should protected them for the Undead.

After some years Draken learnt by his father how to wield a sword. His parents told him: Draken we taught you all we knew. It´s now your time to go finf your place to live. His mother gave him a kiss and his father the talisman. Then Draken left the farm. He wandered a into the deadly dessert. Then he went to tend the water and exhausted, he reached an oasis from a strange power went out. He drunk much water and the he looked into his mirror image and he frightened... His own mirror image talked to him badly. It said : ,,Now the power of the talisman is complett. Now im free !!! HAR HAR HAR HAR !!! Now im Draken and you are only a nobody a shadow a Mystogan !!! HAR HAR HAR HAR !!! Then Mystogan felt a punch in his face and he fainted...

In his dream he saw Draken his evil personality. He killed his father and mother and went away. Now Mystogan knew that he can show his face nobody. So Mystogan started walking to find Draken...

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: Wearing a dark tattered cloak. He is wearing a scarf and a head scarf on it with a headband. His hair is blue and he has a tattoo on his face. But nobody will see it. His legs are wrapped in linen.

-Character Personality: Quiet and mysterious. Not wanting to be confrontational. Is very wary of strangers. But if you make him angry he will kill you in the night.

-Your ambitions: He wants to find the other part of his soul. He wants to kill it. So he gets his inner peace.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes but not much.

-Can your character mine?: Being quite frail, he tries not to overwork herself.

-Are you a capable builder?: Other than building a tent she doesn't dabble in much construction.

-Can you wield a sword?: He isn't aggressive in anyway. Trying to avoid all confrontations. But if he gets in real trouble he will wield it like a master.

-Enjoy Farming?: No

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is faster and agiler than other humans. He can be sneake very quietly.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/mystogan/

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [X]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

Other Comments:

I like the idea how you know a good couple of places, however your spelling and grammar let me down, I suggest just proof reading it please, so you are able to find out a couple of mistakes. I also denied it because... well it Is very unrealistic that the wizard would give a powerful talisman to a stranger. Plus I'd like to see a different name, Mystogen is a popular name and it's going to be slightly annoying... However that is only a minor thing which I am not too bothered about.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

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