Application (IcyHot)

[IcyHot 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: IcyHot

-How old are you?:17 years old.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST Timezone, United States.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: My name is Ryan, I love to play Minecraft and many other types of video games. I also play soccer competitively and attend school daily.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: A couple of hours a day, some days more then others.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: A week or two after it was released, so about a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:The dictionary definition of role-playing is: To change one's behavior to fill a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role or consciously to act out an adopted role. For this purpose we are using the second definition, We are playing a character as if it were real and act as they would to fill their role in society.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: From what I have read it seems very well moderated and in an organized fashion. I have also heard that there are many people which provides realistic situations for characters to RP.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on, Tales of Mel-Lenxia, which is another RP server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read, understand and agree to the rules of the server.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: One of my friends told me about it.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: IcyHot

In-Character:

-Character Name: Lethodus V. Grenedad

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: **An old crusted book is found in the dirt out in the woods, There are a couple of pages ripped and tattered but the beginning seems to be intact.**

It reads: It was a bright summers day, The Grenedad family was out for their usual stroll to sell their goods in a town nearby the caravan. The day was going well, lots of profit was being made. This was just what the Grenedad family need with their new baby son being born just two days ago, and another on the way soon. As the day came to a close they swiftly headed back to the caravan as to not attract much attention.

**The next section is unreadable, it continues a few pages later.**

The sky was dark, the rain was thrashing through the caravan. The men watched outwards for any sign of an attack while the women and children were safe inside. Out of nowhere screaming and yelling was heard in the distance until a group of marauders appeared waving torches and weapons charging for the small caravan. The men, surprised by this were slow to prepare themselves for the attack. A few had already lost their lives when it was decided to surrender and lose as little as possible. This was the night that Lethodus was taken from his family. The marauders raised him as one of their own, which is where he learned to use all sorts of weapons, hunt, and cook on the go.

**This is where the book ends and the rest is unreadable.**

-Character Age: 25

-Character Appearance: Vibrant and diligent, always seems to be on the ball. His hair is cropped just a bit over his forehead. Slim, keen ,and very agile. Built to fight. Keeps on his person a thin sharp katana for quick and easy moves against any foe, with 2 saxe knives at his belt and a Bow on his back. A mouth shroud covers half of his face up to the bridge of the nose.

-Character Personality: Self-Directed, Confident, Can come off as "rude" or "mean" to others, Quick temper, Loves a good Ale and can never let go of a challenge.

-Your ambitions: My ambitions are to create a character that fits in well with the story and that other character can interact and RP well with.

-Can your character read or write?: He has basic knowledge.

-Can your character mine?: No

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes

-Enjoy Farming?: No

-Does your character have any special skills?: Hunting, Basic cooking, Skill with swords and a bow, Stealth, Stealing.

-A screenshot of your skin:

[Blawharag 277]

Denied

Well on your way to an accepted app, and have a lot of potential, fix this and you should be all set:

#1 Flesh out your bio a little. I enjoy your unique approach to a book format and it is better written than many other bios, however I would like to see more detail and effort put in. Maybe continue on into your life and go into detail for some of the more important life events, such as being abducted. As it stands you say very little.

#2 Why is your character a capable builder? The question refers to build cities and structures. I would expect your character to be able to pitch tents and the like, but beyond that you give no explanation why he can build in either your bio or elsewhere.

Please do not re-post your app for another 48 hours. Take that time to flesh out your bio. Many orphaned/stolen children apps tend to get denied, but a well crafted bio is always a saving grace in every application. Good Luck and I look forward to seeing you next app.

[IcyHot 1]

That's understandable, I would like to say though that the question on if you are capable of building I read it as meaning if I can build things and make them look nice. In response to my character you would be right about only tents and camp set ups, my mistake. I'll post a more in detailed bio in 2 more days then.